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I like sports, especially tennis so I often go out to play tennis with my friends on the weekend.
But we play it only for 2 or 3 hours so, afterward, we often go to a game arcade and enjoy playing catch.
Jun 26th 2009 01:19 Dev

  • I like sports, especially tennis so I often go out to play tennis with my friends on the weekend.
  • I like sports, especially tennis so I often go out to play tennis with my friends on the weekend(s).

 

  • But we play it only for 2 or 3 hours so, afterward, we often go to a game arcade and enjoy playing catch.
  • We play tennis of 2 to 3 hours then afterward we usually go to a game arcade and we also enjoy playing catch.

 
work on sentence structure :)
Jun 26th 2009 01:46 makaroni_sarada

Thank you for your correction!
I can't understand the sentence"We play tennis of 2 to 3 hours". XD
Jun 26th 2009 04:24 Clarissa

  • I like sports, especially tennis so I often go out to play tennis with my friends on the weekend.
  • I like sports, especially tennis, so I often go out to play tennis with my friends on the weekend.

 
I think "We play tennis of 2 to 3 hours" is incorrect.

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