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Dec 07th 2011 19:32 INTRODUCTION
Konnichiwa, Watashi wa nihongo to Kankokugo no gakushu o kaishi shiyou to shite to watashi wa yurina sutato o shutoku suru no ga daisukida, watashi wa eigo to doitsugo ni tan'nōdesu. Watashi wa Nihon no gainen o rikai shi. Watashi wa ongaku o aishi, watashi wa gengogaku o senko shi, jugyo de minoring shiteimasu. Watashi no mokuhyo wa kaigai no to kibo ni michita, hokanohito no kotonaru gengo o oshieru ni iku kotodesushi, watashi wa jissai ni ikutsu ka no tasuke o kangei surudarou.
Keigu Ema

naomi
Dec 07th 2011 19:46
nihongo ga totemo jouzu desu ne.
kannji ya hiragana,katakana no yomi wa dekimasuka?
nihongo ga nyuuryoku dekiru to iine＾＾
yaggy
Dec 07th 2011 20:02
  • Konnichiwa chodo kono saito ni bunrui shite okotta.

  • Konnichiwa chodo kono saito ni bunrui shite okotta. (Sorry, but I can't understand the blue-letter part. It doesn't make sense in Japanese.)

 
  • Watashi no mokuhyo wa kaigai no to kibo ni michita, hokanohito no kotonaru gengo o oshieru ni iku kotodesushi, watashi wa jissai ni ikutsu ka no tasuke o kangei surudarou.

  • Watashi no mokuhyo wa kaigai no to kibo ni michita, hokanohito no kotonaru gengo o oshieru ni ikuoshieniiku kotodesushi, watashi wa jissai ni ikutsu ka no tasuke o kangei surudarou.ॅ

 
First of all, you might as well be able to use HIRAGANA.
Dec 07th 2011 20:27 Emma
謝罪、私はひらがなを使って得意ではない。ずっと、あなたのコメントや訂正に感謝する。
Dec 07th 2011 23:18 yaggy
'cause you have to use ひらがな
Let's practice!
kama
Thank you for your correction!
Dec 08th 2011 05:46
  • Konnichiwa, Watashi wa nihongo to Kankokugo no gakushu o kaishi shiyou to shite to watashi wa yurina sutato o shutoku suru no ga daisukida, watashi wa eigo to doitsugo ni tan'nōdesu.

  • Konnichiwa, Watashi wa nihongo to Kankokugo no gakushu o kaishi shiyou to shite to → hajime-mashita 'have started to study'. watashi wa yurina → benrina sutato o shutoku suru → sagasu / mitukeru no ga daisukida ← desu. watashi wa eigo to doitsugo ni tan'nōdesu ← ga deki-masu. * 'tanno' is a bookish word, so it sounds more natural to use 'dekiru', instead, when you introduce yourself to somebody.

 
  • Watashi wa Nihon no gainen o rikai shi.

  • Watashi wa Nihon no gainen ← bunka o rikai shi. *You can use 'gainen' as 'Nihon-go no gainen' (the notion of the Japanese language).

 
  • Watashi wa ongaku o aishi, watashi wa gengogaku o senko shi, jugyo de minoring shiteimasu.

  • Watashi wa ongaku o aishi, watashi wa gengogaku o senko shi, jugyo de minoring ← ??? shiteimasu.

 
  • Watashi no mokuhyo wa kaigai no to kibo ni michita, hokanohito no kotonaru gengo o oshieru ni iku kotodesushi, watashi wa jissai ni ikutsu ka no tasuke o kangei surudarou.

  • Watashi no mokuhyo wa kaigai no → he（へ）to kibo ni michita → te, hokanohito no → to kotonaru gengo o oshieru ni iku kotodesushi. watashi wa jissai ni ikutsu ka no tasuke o kangei surudarou. ← I understand what you'd like to say, but it would be much easier to say 'watashi ni nihon-go o oshiete-kudasai' or 'watashi no benkyo o tetsudatte kudasai' ('Give me a support to improve my Japanese' or 'Help me with my Japanese writing').

 
  • Keigu Ema

  • Keigu EmaIn this occasion, 'keigu' is too polite. You can just finish writing with your first name only.

 
I can see that you've studied Japanese seriously a lot.
The Japanese language is rather complicated, having different polite forms and using mixed writing system with Chinese characters, etc.
Anyway, I got impressed to see your writing to get a chance to take it more serious with my own foreign language studies.
Dec 08th 2011 08:13 Emma
Thank you it is good to hear that for I have only doing Japanese for 1year as a actually study it is great to hear I'm improving
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