The Story of a Pot
Dec 31st 2009 19:24
Men is cooking a bacon putting one on a pot.
After cooking is done, men notices some black spot on the pot.
So, Man try to rub that off.
The bubble of detergent is overflowing.
But the spot doesn't rub out.
Men try and try over and over.
After all, the men give up and put the pot in the shelf.
A friend of the pot says,
" Oh, men! What happen to you? What's scar on your forehead? "
and the pot says,
" That scar? It's the token of tolerating in the hottest fire for some minutes. That is to say, It's a scar of golry. "
-The End- so is 2009 year.
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A man is cooking a making bacon by putting one on a pot. (In this case I think the pot should be called Pan ^_^)
After the cooking is done, the man notices some black spots on the pot.
So the man tries to scrub them off.
The bubble of the detergent are overflowing. (Remember to use plural form)
But the spots don't rub come out/off.
The man tries and try over and over.
After all that the man gives up and puts the pot on the shelf.
" Oh, man!
What happened to you?
What's that scar on your forehead?
" This/the scar?
It's the token of tolerating in the hottest fire temperature for some minutes.
That is to say, It's a scar of golry.This is to say a scar of glory.
-The End- so is the year 2009 year.
あなたのえいごがいいです、がんばってください！
A man is cooking a bacon, putting one piece on the skillet/pan at a time. a pot. (pot is the cooking ware you make soup with, a skillet/pan is flatter and something you can fry things on)
After he finished cooking the bacon , the man noticed some black spot on the skillet/pan.
So, the ,an tried to clean it off.
The bubbles of the detergent were overflowing.
But the spot didn't come out.
The man tried over and over.
After all that, the man gave up and put the pan on the shelf.
A friend of the pan said,
" Oh, man!
What happened to you?
What's that scar on your forehead?
and the pan said,
" This scar?
It's the token of tolerating in withstanding the hottest fire for a couple of minutes.
That is to say, it's a scar of glory!
-The End- so is the year 2009 .
Great Job!!!