Making a story is fun 3
Sep 30th 2009 12:29
After Elain pushed me, I steped close to the strange Ex-president look person.
I had no choice.
"Excuse me, sir" I said and simulteneously I hid my cosh behind my back.
He looked at me once.
"Sir, why'd you do such miserably thing to the poor shop-keeper?" I asked him with quite calmly tone.
I didn' t want him got exciting, because in situation the guy maybe had more dangerous things than his fist to hit poor man.
He was staring me with a bit emptiness color.
I wonder if he answer me or don't.
I was only what he just stared at.
I had no choice.
"Excuse me, sir" I said and simulteneously I hid my cosh behind my back.
He looked at me once.
"Sir, why'd you do such miserably thing to the poor shop-keeper?" I asked him with quite calmly tone.
I didn' t want him got exciting, because in situation the guy maybe had more dangerous things than his fist to hit poor man.
He was staring me with a bit emptiness color.
I wonder if he answer me or don't.
I was only what he just stared at.
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After Elain pushed me, I stepped close to the strange person who looked like the ex-president.
"Excuse me, sir," I said, and simultaneously I hid my cosh(?) behind my back. || "Cosh" is not a word and I'm not sure exactly what word you meant to use.
"Sir, why'd you do such a miserable thing to the poor shopkeeper?" I asked in a quite calm tone.
I didn' t want him to get excited, because in this situation, the guy may have had more dangerous things besides the fist he hit the poor man with.
He was staring at me with a bit of emptiness color.
I wondered if he would answer me or not.
He just stared at me.
Thank you for correction!
Also your comment is very encouraging.
I love stories, too!
Anyway, don't you use the word "cosh" ?
I studied it from a dicrionary.
According to this dictionary, cosh means some stick or something that be used as a weapon.
Then I meant it.
こんばんは！！
私も小説を創って、大好きで～す＾＾
でも、日本語の小説を書いたことが、無理ですね ~"~
making the story 頑張りますよう！！＾＾
こんにちは。
南さんも、日本語の練習として、一度何かお話を書いてみたらいいと思います。
応援ありがとう！
がんばります。
I wish I can read the whole story.
Are you still gonna continue to write the story?
Hi!
Nice to meet you.
>I wish I can read the whole story.
>Are you still gonna continue to write the story?
I still have enthusiasm to write the story, but now I need some idea to continue.
Sorry, please wait untill my idea'll be mature.