Making a story is fun 4

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Dec 21st 2009 12:21

"Sir, don't gaze at me like this. Please."
I annoyed for the guys attitude.
The guy must be a pervert, I was sure about it.
This time, Ex-president's mouth was trembling.
He would say something? My muscles strained a bit for expect.
But also he could just sing stupid songs or roar like wild animals.
I didn't know what this sort of person want to do, so I had to keep Elain and the shopkeeper away from him.
I watched the guy carefully, and felt Elain watched me from behind my back.
After awhile Ex-president opend his mouth.
It was very slow.
"You...you know where Gerdner is?"
I could catch the word "Gerdner" but his voice was quite hard to hear.
Is "Gerdner" a someone's name? I felt little confused.

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Dec 21st 2009 13:23 cortcort

English
Japanese , Spanish

I annoyed for the guys attitude.
I got annoyed byfor the guys attitude.

He would say something?
He Would hesay something?

My muscles strained a bit for expect.
My muscles strained a bit for expecting.

But also he could just sing stupid songs or roar like wild animals.
But also he alsocould just sing stupid songs or roar like awild animals.

I didn't know what this sort of person want to do, so I had to keep Elain and the shopkeeper away from him.
I didn't know what this sort of person would want to do, so I had to keep Elain and the shopkeeper away from him.

I watched the guy carefully, and felt Elain watched me from behind my back.
I watched the guy carefully, and felt Elain watched me from behind my back.

Is "Gerdner" a someone's name?
Is "Gerdner" a someone's name?

wow you did a pretty good job ^-^

Jan 17th 2010 12:18 Joebob

English
Japanese

"Sir, don't gaze at me like this.
"Sir, don't gaze at me like that.(I think "don't look at me like that" would be better)

I annoyed for the guys attitude.
I annoyed for the guys attitude.-I was getting annoyed at his attitude-His attitude was annoying me

The guy must be a pervert, I was sure about it.
The guy must have been a pervert, I was sure about it.

This time, Ex-president's mouth was trembling.
This time, the Ex-president's mouth was trembling.

He would say something?
He Would he say something?

My muscles strained a bit for expect.
My muscles strained a bit in anticipation.

But also he could just sing stupid songs or roar like wild animals.
But also he could just sing stupid songs or roar like wild animals.-He could also just sing stupid songs or roar like wild animals.