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Mar 17, 2009 01:19 feeling
Every time when I saw some beautiful sceneries in Hollywood movies,there was a impulsion from my heart that urged me to go there in person !

Experiencing different worlds and places, I have been dreaming of studying abroad.

With my age and economy situation in mind tough，It maybe hard to realize.

I heard that it costs about more than 30000 US$ a year to study in American.

I have no idea whether it's true or not,but now I still have to give back my student loan .

So,studying abroad may be just a dream that I could not make it come true

Nevertheless before this vague notion has been realized, the most important thing I have to do is to improve my poor English ability
Anya
Mar 17, 2009 01:32
  • Every time when I saw some beautiful sceneries in Hollywood movies,there was a impulsion from my heart that urged me to go there in person !

  • Every time when I see some beautiful scenery in Hollywood movies, an impulse from deep within me urges me to go there in person !

 
  • Experiencing different worlds and places, I have been dreaming of studying abroad.

  • Wanting to experience different worlds and places, I have been dreaming of studying abroad.

 
  • With my age and economy situation in mind tough，It maybe hard to realize.

  • At my age and with the economic situation in mind though this may be a hard dream to realize.

 
  • I heard that it costs about more than 30000 US$ a year to study in American.

  • I have heard that it costs about more than 30000 US$ a year to study in America.

 
  • I have no idea whether it's true or not,but now I still have to give back my student loan .

  • I have no idea whether that's true or not, but right now I still have to pay back my student loan .

 
  • So,studying abroad may be just a dream that I could not make it come true

  • So, studying abroad may be just a dream that will not come true for me.

 
  • Nevertheless before this vague notion has been realized, the most important thing I have to do is to improve my poor English ability

  • Nevertheless, before this vague notion can be realized, the most important thing I have to do is to improve my poor English ability.

 

Nice work. You're writing complex sentences, so I had to make several corrections,
but your meaning is clear and you write well.

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