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Dec 29, 2011 09:56
Hi!.

I am excited.

Because two foreigners have read my diary.

Thank you!

I will now introduce myself.

I am 37 years old. I am married.

My wife likes our house clean.

So she gets angry if I mess up a room.

She is fearful...


Bye! See you next time.
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Dec 29, 2011 10:09
  • I get excited.

  • I am excited. ☺"I am excited" current use.☺

 
  • Because two foreing contry peaple see my daiary.

  • Because two foreigners have read my diary. ☺日記|乳製品☺

 
  • I make self-intoroduction.

  • I will now introduce myself.

 
  • I got married.

  • I am married. ☺" I got married" is something you say to a friend you have not seen for a while:Prima: Hey! Keku san! It's been a long time! How are you? Secunda: Oh, fine, fine... After graduating college I went straight to work for the Umbrella Corporation. I work in the bio-engineering lab. Incidentally, that's where I met Keiko chan....Prima: You mean...?Secunda: Yes... I got married. Wonderful woman, my Keiko...☻

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  • My wife like clean room.

  • My wife like a clean house.

 
  • So she get angry if I mess up a room.

  • So she gets angry if I make a mess in one of our rooms.

 

Good work!

Jan 9, 2012 01:18 けく
Thank you!
May
Thank you for your correction!
Dec 29, 2011 10:10
  • I get excited.

  • I got excited.

 
  • Because two foreing contry peaple see my daiary.

  • Because two people from foreign countries saw my diary.

 
  • I make self-intoroduction.

  • I'll make/write my self-introduction. (自然な英語：I'll introduce myself)

 
  • I got married.

  • I am married.

 
  • My wife like clean room.

  • My wife likes clean rooms.

 
  • So she get angry if I mess up a room.

  • So she will get angry if I mess up a room.

 
  • She is fearful...

  • She is frightening...

 

よろしくお願いします!
Nice to meet you!

If you have any questions about the corrections or anything to do with English, feel free to ask!

Jan 9, 2012 01:18 けく
Thank you!
rehrah furinto
Thank you for your correction!
Dec 29, 2011 10:16
  • Hi!.

  • Hi!.

 
  • I get excited.

  • I am excited, because two foreigners read my diary.

 
  • I am 37 years old.

  • I am 37 years old, and married.

 
  • My wife like clean room.

  • My wife likes our house clean, and gets angry if I mess up a room.

 
  • see you next time.

  • See you next time.

 

Good Luck with your English!

Jan 9, 2012 01:17 けく
Thank you!
Nomiyami34
Dec 29, 2011 10:25

Pretty good English. How long have you been studying?

Jan 9, 2012 01:18 けく
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