Entry a half-marathon

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Today I applied for "Kyoto Charity Fan Run" and entried a group of half-marathon.
http://www.kyoto-nicco.org/funrun.htm

I haven't run a half-marathon yet. So I've been jogging a few times a week. The distance of a jogging is about 4 miles(6.5 km) in 40 minutes.

If I keep training, certainly, I will be able to finish in race!
Apr 01st 2009 21:55 mr spoon

  • Today I applied for "Kyoto Charity Fan Run" and entried a group of half-marathon.
  • Today I applied for "Kyoto Charity Fun Run" and entered a group in the half-marathon.

 

  • If I keep training, certainly, I will be able to finish in race!
  • If I keep training, I will certainly be able to finish the race!

 
Whoo, that sounds fast! I‘m glad you have such confidence, though!
Apr 02nd 2009 03:14 raishel

  • Entry a half-marathon
  • Entry Entering/Entered a half-marathon

 

  • The distance of a jogging is about 4 miles(6.5 km) in 40 minutes.
  • The distance of a jogging I jog is about 4 miles(6.5 km) in 40 minutes. This sentence was really awkward. You could just say "the distance I jog is about 4 miles, and i do it in 40 minutes." When you begin with "the distance" it feels weird to see "in 40 minutes" at the end.

 
The other corrections were very good, too. ^^
I want to be able to run a half marathon as well... I currently only do 5ks. :D
Good luck!!
Apr 02nd 2009 04:24

  • Entry a half-marathon
  • Half-marathon entry

 

  • Today I applied for "Kyoto Charity Fan Run" and entried a group of half-marathon.
  • Today, I applied to enter the Kyoto Charity Fun Run half-marathon.

 

  • The distance of a jogging is about 4 miles(6.5 km) in 40 minutes.
  • The race distance is 6.5 kilometres and takes about 40 minutes.

 
Apr 02nd 2009 07:57 Shigeo

to mr spoon
The time isn't very fast. It's normal. I want to run more faster! :-P

to raishel, ラリー
Thanks for corrections!
I understood that sentence can be natural by aparting that.
Apr 02nd 2009 11:58 listic

I'm so sorry i wasn't in time to correct your journal entry but i see a lot of kind souls had done it for you. ^_^.
Apr 02nd 2009 20:46 Shigeo

to listic
Thanks for visiting my diary.
I took a lot of collections thankfully.^o^

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