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Feb 11th 2012 09:37

I'd like to improve essay writing skills. My reading and listening skills are better, because my TOEIC score is over 900. However, when it comes to writing essays, my score of a essay test is not good. I will write essays on this site later. I'd appreciate it if someone corrects my essays.

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Feb 11th 2012 18:51 arisha

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I'd like to improve essay writing skills.
I'd like to improve my essay writing skills.

My reading and listening skills are better, because my TOEIC score is over 900.
I am better at reading and listening, because my TOEIC score is over 900. I changed the beginning of this sentence so that it would connect with the previous sentence better.