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hi everyone¡¡¡¡ n.n

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> hi this is my first text so i hope anyone could correct my text because i want to be english teacher, and i want to speak and write the english at 100% n.n

> i have been studying english for 5 years ¡¡¡ but i i know i have some grammar mistakes spelling etc. im from mexico and im studying the carrier of tourism and maybe i could be teacher english someday ... who knows :o

> im here in this pague this is my third day yet and i have some friends n.n im here waiting ours corrections so don hesitate¡¡¡¡

> well i want to do some friend here too¡¡¡ and if somene needs help whit his spanish dont hesitate to messsage me¡¡¡ i would help you¡¡¡

>everyone have a good weekend¡¡¡ and see your later on my next diary teme xD

> pd. THANKS EVERYONE AND GOOD BYE¡¡¡ :P
Mar 10th 2009 10:54 zxcvbnm

  • hi everyone¡¡¡¡ n.n
  • Hi everyone!!!
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  • > hi this is my first text so i hope anyone could correct my text because i want to be english teacher, and i want to speak and write the english at 100% n.n
  • Hi. This is my first text so I hope anyone can correct my text because I want to be an English teacher and I want to speak and write English fluently.
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  • > i have been studying english for 5 years ¡¡¡ but i i know i have some grammar mistakes spelling etc.
  • I have been studying English for 5 years but I know I have some grammar and spelling mistakes.
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  • im from mexico and im studying the carrier of tourism and maybe i could be teacher english someday ...
  • I'm from Mexico and I'm studying for a career in tourism and maybe I could teach English someday.
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  • who knows :o
  • Who knows?
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  • > im here in this pague this is my third day yet and i have some friends n.n im here waiting ours corrections so don hesitate¡¡¡¡
  • I'm here in this page. This is my third day and I have some friends. I'm here waiting for corrections so don't hesitate!!!
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  • > well i want to do some friend here too¡¡¡ and if somene needs help whit his spanish dont hesitate to messsage me¡¡¡ i would help you¡¡¡
  • Well I want to help some friends here too so if someone needs help with their Spanish don't hesitate to message me. I will help you.
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  • >everyone have a good weekend¡¡¡ and see your later on my next diary teme xD
  • Everyone have a good weekend and see you later on my next diary.
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  • > pd.
  • > pd.
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Good, a few grammar and spelling mistakes but I could understand what you were trying to say. Try to get rid of the ">" before each paragraph.

Hasta ahora.
Mar 11th 2009 13:13 -roronoabolio-

thanks for the corrections, sorry for some grammars erros i was a little bit in ahurry

bye bye see you later dude. thanks
-roronoabolio-
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