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Jun 13th 2012 17:42
I watched firefly last night.
I felt beauty of them.
I could not photograph them.
But I think it's good because they light only a moment.
So firefly are transient.
Vermilion
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Jun 13th 2012 19:07
  • I watched firefly last night.

  • I saw fireflies last night.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • I felt beauty of them.

  • I felt their beauty.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • I could not photograph them.

  • I couldn't take their photo.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • But I think it's good because they light only a moment.

  • But I think it was good because they lit only a moment.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • So firefly are transient.

  • Fireflies are transient.

1 people think this correction is good.  
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