The brother

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On sunday morning, Lisa was walking on narrow road that was by the fields where weeds grew thick.

Everything was very peaceful for her, except her brother's problem. So, she concentrated on chatting every night. One day, she went out to see a movie "Confessions of shopaholic" in the next city. The main actress (heroine) was very beautiful and young. She was hungry a brand-name products. Lisa was also a shopaholic girl. Although. on her back way back, she noticed fashion stores, but she didn't buy anything for her. She graduated from waste. For her, the move gave good advices.

She got a feeling that "Big Brother is watching you". It's good phrase,,,
The phrase is in 村上春樹's latest novel ; 1Q84 and George Orwell's novel ; 1984. -----(Haruki Murakami)
Jun 10th 2009 14:57 falafel

  • On sunday morning, Lisa was walking on narrow road that was by the fields where weeds grew thick.
  • On Sunday morning, Lisa was walking on a narrow road that was by fields where the weeds grew thick.

 

  • One day, she went out to see a movie "Confessions of shopaholic" in the next city.
  • One day, she went out to see a movie called "Confessions of shopaholic" in the next city.

 

  • She was hungry a brand-name products.
  • She was hungry for brand-name products.

 

  • Although.
  • Although

 

  • on her back way back, she noticed fashion stores, but she didn't buy anything for her.
  • on her back way back she noticed some fashion stores, but she didn't buy anything for herself.

 

  • For her, the move gave good advices.
  • For her, the movie had good advice. (had a good moralか had a good messageでもいいです)

 

  • She got a feeling that "Big Brother is watching you".
  • She got the feeling that "Big Brother is watching you".

 

  • It's good phrase,,,
  • It's a good phrase,,,

 
Jun 10th 2009 15:11 Bah_Dure

  • On sunday morning, Lisa was walking on narrow road that was by the fields where weeds grew thick.
  • On Sunday morning, Lisa went walking on a narrow road near fields where weeds grew thickly.

 

  • Everything was very peaceful for her, except her brother's problem.
  • Everything was very peaceful to her, except her brother's problem (または "the problem with her brother").

 

  • So, she concentrated on chatting every night.
  • So, she concentrated on chatting (with him) every night.

 

  • One day, she went out to see a movie "Confessions of shopaholic" in the next city.
  • One day, she went out to see a movie called "Confessions of a Shopaholic" in the next city.

 

  • The main actress (heroine) was very beautiful and young.
  • The main actress (heroine) was very beautiful and young,

 

  • She was hungry a brand-name products.
  • but she was hungry for brand-name products. (または "but she craved brand-name products.")

 

  • Lisa was also a shopaholic girl.
  • Lisa was a shopaholic.

 

  • Although.
  • Although,

 

  • on her back way back, she noticed fashion stores, but she didn't buy anything for her.
  • on her way back (home), she noticed fashion stores, but she didn't buy anything for herself.

 

  • She graduated from waste.
  • She graduated from waste. (または "She had overcome that waste.")

 

  • For her, the move gave good advices.
  • For her, the move had good advice.

 

  • The phrase is in 村上春樹's latest novel ; 1Q84 and George Orwell's novel ; 1984.
  • The phrase is in 村上春樹's latest novel "1Q84" and George Orwell's novel "1984."

 
雲桃さん、こんにちは

今回は文章は素敵うまいです。:)「fields where weeds grew thick」って特にすごい表現があります。
(Your entry this time was great and well-written. The part "fields where weeds grew thick" is especially amazing.)

頑張ってくださいね~!

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