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Apr 25th 2012 13:53
I am still on the final exams, but so far so good, I feel like my fluency of English speaking is getting better and better.

It has been more than 4 months since I left Taiwan, and I can't deny that I already miss everything excludes those bad memories.

Sometimes I immerse myself into imaging what kind of my future will be; was it really a good decision leaving where I had lived for more than 20 years? But I know I have to accept the truth, that is, I am here in Costa Rica now.

Learning Spanish and promote English in the same time are not an easy task, especially when you have to do a lot of homework. Being busy learning, I think I just proved that time really flies.





齐冉 Kieran
Thank you for your correction!
Apr 25th 2012 14:04
  • I am still on the final exams, but so far so good, I feel like my fluency of English speaking is getting better and better.

  • I am still taking my final exams, but so far so good. I feel like the fluency of my English speaking is getting better and better. (Or, "My English fluency is improving." Also, "like" is optional, and would be best removed in formal writing.)

    I would change the second comma to a period.

 
  • It has been more than 4 months since I left Taiwan, and I can't deny that I already miss everything excludes those bad memories.

  • It has been more than 4 months since I left Taiwan, and I can't deny that I already miss everything, excluding those bad memories.

 
  • Sometimes I immerse myself into imaging what kind of my future will be; was it really a good decision leaving where I had lived for more than 20 years?

  • Sometimes I immerse myself in imagining what kind of my future will be like. Was it really a good decision to leave where I had lived for more than 20 years?

 
  • But I know I have to accept the truth, that is, I am here in Costa Rica now.

  • In the end, I know I have to accept the truth, that is, I am here in Costa Rica now.

 
  • Learning Spanish and promote English in the same time are not an easy task, especially when you have to do a lot of homework.

  • Learning Spanish and improving my English at the same time is not easy, especially when I have to do a lot of homework.

 
  • Being busy learning, I think I just proved that time really flies.

  • While I am busy learning, I find that time really flies.

 
Sounds fun! I wish I could learn two languages at once. :)
May 01st 2012 13:35 Lee
I keep working hard for that :P
AnkleBiter
Thank you for your correction!
Apr 25th 2012 14:04
  • Learning Spanish and promote English in the same time are not an easy task, especially when you have to do a lot of homework.

  • Learning Spanish and promoting English at the same time is not an easy task, especially when you have to do a lot of homework.

 
  • Being busy learning, I think I just proved that time really flies.

  • Being busy learning, I think I just proved that time really flies.Busy with learning, I think...

 
Very well done. I know what you're trying to do with the "are" when talking about Spanish and English, but it's better to use "is" in your case. Hope this helps!
May 01st 2012 13:36 Lee
Thank you it helps a lot really! :D
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