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Mar 9, 2012 05:37
Hello to all will read my words.
I'm Italian,
I'd like learn English language
I'm trying to write some things (also if my brain is like a blank screen at the moment lol) to see if there is someone that will correct my bad english.
Thank you
Annette
Mar 13, 2012 08:12
  • Hello to all will read my words.

  • Hello to all who will read my words.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • I'd like learn English language

  • I'd like to learn the English language.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • I'm trying to write some things (also if my brain is like a blank screen at the moment lol) to see if there is someone that will correct my bad english.

  • I'm trying to write some things (even if my brain is like a blank screen at the moment lol) to see if there is someone that will correct my bad English.

1 people think this correction is good.  

Hello! Welcome to Lang-8!

valkonrad
Mar 29, 2012 23:19
  • Hello to all will read my words.

  • Hello to everyone who will read my words.

 
  • I'd like learn English language

  • I'd like to learn English language

    You seem to be doing very well already!

 
  • I'm trying to write some things (also if my brain is like a blank screen at the moment lol) to see if there is someone that will correct my bad english.

  • I'm trying to write some things (even though my brain is like a blank screen at the moment lol) to see if there is anyone who will correct my bad English.

 

Only the RED are mistakes, so you see you have very few. BLUE are slightly more natural suggestions.
Also, I thought I should show you that I was paying attention;-)
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