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A few days ago I met a girl whose appearance resembles my ex-girl. Whenever I tell somebody my ex-girl, I don't mention the word 'friend' because she was not classified as friend. I think if I had a girl who spent much time with me, I would call her carefully girlfriend. Anyway, I thought she resembles amazingly my ex-girl. Yesterday I could chat with her a little because we have the same direction to home. By talking with her more and more, I realized she is simiral even in personality.
My ex-girl wanted me to be beside her, so I was. Although I tried to do best for her, she met many men and stood me up. Actually during time that I was on the hook, I didn't know what her way to love sombody is. But some later I knew little what love she wants is.
One day I drank alcohol with her after a little time no see. While drinking with her, she suddenly felt headache a lot. I thought she had drunk much before meeting me. She was rolling on floor with pain crying out. I had to take a taxi while carrying her on my back. She could not know and distinguish anything around her. Just she was crying out until I got to hospital.
Lying on bed, she seemed to be tired. She just was frowning and undergoing her pain with silence. After a sedative was injected to her, she didn't cry out anymore. Some later she tried to say something, so I was about to be closer to her. When I was listening carefully to her voice bending body, she slowly whispered my phone number to me. When I heard my phone number, I was so confused, which meant in her subconsciousness she carved me deeply. Although we didn't meet each other long time and she got along with other guys, she did depend on me more than others. Even if I was with her, I couldn't feel closeness at first, but after hearing my phone number she seemed to be closer to me than ever. She knew what I did for her and my truth, but we already were far from one another. It made me feel sad and angry. Yesterday, I could recall this because of the girl I met a few days ago.
Another cat will be happy, because there will not be me beside the cat.
My ex-girl wanted me to be beside her, so I was. Although I tried to do best for her, she met many men and stood me up. Actually during time that I was on the hook, I didn't know what her way to love sombody is. But some later I knew little what love she wants is.
One day I drank alcohol with her after a little time no see. While drinking with her, she suddenly felt headache a lot. I thought she had drunk much before meeting me. She was rolling on floor with pain crying out. I had to take a taxi while carrying her on my back. She could not know and distinguish anything around her. Just she was crying out until I got to hospital.
Lying on bed, she seemed to be tired. She just was frowning and undergoing her pain with silence. After a sedative was injected to her, she didn't cry out anymore. Some later she tried to say something, so I was about to be closer to her. When I was listening carefully to her voice bending body, she slowly whispered my phone number to me. When I heard my phone number, I was so confused, which meant in her subconsciousness she carved me deeply. Although we didn't meet each other long time and she got along with other guys, she did depend on me more than others. Even if I was with her, I couldn't feel closeness at first, but after hearing my phone number she seemed to be closer to me than ever. She knew what I did for her and my truth, but we already were far from one another. It made me feel sad and angry. Yesterday, I could recall this because of the girl I met a few days ago.
Another cat will be happy, because there will not be me beside the cat.
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By talking with her more and more, I realized she is simiral [similar] even in personality.
Although I tried to do best [ better to use 'the' so it should be 'the best'] for her, she met many men and stood me up.
Actually during time that I was on the hook, I didn't know what her way to love sombody [somebody] is.
But some later [what does it mean? i think you can use ' then ', or just write 'later'] I knew little what love she wants is.
She was rolling on floor with pain crying out. [hmm sorry, buti don't understand this sentence mean]
hmm,, what a nice story... like in drama i watch...i really sweep out of it.. somehow we realize something when we've lost it.. :')
Yesterday I could chat a little with her (a little) because we have the same direction to home. (we go in the same direction to go home)
Actually during the time that I was on the hook, I didn't know what's her way to love somebody is. (I didn't know how she loved)
But some later I knew understoon a little what type of love she wants is.
One day I drank alcohol with her after a little time not seeing her.
While drinking with her, she suddenly felt/suffered from a bad headache a lot.
She was rolling on floor (with pain) crying out with pain. (problem in word order)
(Just) She was just crying out until I got to hospital.
She just was frowning and undergoing her pain with in silence.
After a sedative was injected to her, she didn't cry out anymore.
When I was listening carefully to her voice (bending body), she slowly whispered my phone number to me.
Although we didn't meet each other for a long time and she got along with other guys, she did depend on me more than others.
Even if I was with her, I couldn't feel closeness at first, but after hearing my phone number she seemed to be closer to me than ever.
She knew what I did for her and my truth, but we were already were far from one another.
Another cat will be happy, because I there will not be me beside the cat.
Good english, as always the problem is mainly with word order.
Nice story, its strange how sometimes some people can bring us back so many memories!