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Different people have Different views on labour, but there are some people have negative views on it.They think it unnecessary in the society when it makes no profits . Actually they had change the real mean of labour paying more attention to the labour if it can make a lot of financial profits .
However,labour to our society is what air to human beings. The profits of labour is endless no matter how little it is. It's hard to image if there is no labours in the world. It is likely to have no lives anything else. It's labour that makes the world alive and wonderful.
Now that the labour is too important to live without it, so what should we do to it?First, we should realize that the labour is a honour .Then, we should not give it up however little it is. Last but not least, we ought to keep it in mind to labour anytime anywhere.
However,labour to our society is what air to human beings. The profits of labour is endless no matter how little it is. It's hard to image if there is no labours in the world. It is likely to have no lives anything else. It's labour that makes the world alive and wonderful.
Now that the labour is too important to live without it, so what should we do to it?First, we should realize that the labour is a honour .Then, we should not give it up however little it is. Last but not least, we ought to keep it in mind to labour anytime anywhere.
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The Profits Benefits of Labour
After reading the essay through, I feel it's more accurate to say 'benefits' rather than 'profits'.
Different people have different views on labour, but there are some people who have negative views on it.
They think it unnecessary in the society when it makes no profits .
I would say "... when it does not benefit them financially." 'Profits' is a little too business-specific.
Actually they have changed the real meaning of labour, paying more attention to the labour only if it can make a lot of financial profits .
Again, this is not wrong, but it might be better if the last part was "...if it can benefit them financially."
However, labour is to our society what air is to human beings.
The profits benefit of labour is endless, no matter how little small.
It is probably not wrong to say "no matter how little it is" but here, I feel that using 'small' is a better choice.
It's would be hard to image if there is were no labours in the world.
It is likely to have no lives anything else.
This sentence is unclear to me. I don't know what you're trying to say.
It is labour that makes the world alive and wonderful.
Now, that the labour is too important to live without it. So what should we do to about it?
First, we should realize that the labour is a honour .
Then, we should not give it up, however little it is.
Last but not least, we ought to keep it in mind to labour anytime, anywhere.
Also, keep in mind that using 'ou' in certain words (ie. honour, labour) is the British style. American-English just spells them as honor and labor. It's not wrong, but make sure to keep your audience in mind when you're writing.
Great job!