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Mar 19, 2012 10:22
Hi people and good evening.
Today stayed a beautiful day.
There was a lot Sun here.
It stayed really a wonderful day...!
I walked with my sisters and we said a numerous nice shops.
There were many people that turned around us.
Now I go to sleep; I am so tired! Yawn!

See you soon! =)

(I promise that the next time I'll write more. =D )
Pangburger
Thank you for your correction!
Mar 19, 2012 11:33
  • I walked with my sisters and we said a numerous nice shops.

  • I walked with my sisters and we said a numerous nice shops.I walked with my sisters and we saw a lot of nice shops.

    "A lot of" is commonly used here.

 
  • Now I go to sleep; I am so tired!

  • I am going to sleep/bed now; I am so tired!

    Sleep or bed is correct.

 

Mar 19, 2012 19:45 Kyos
Thanks a lot Pangburger =)
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