so tired
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hmm..
i went to the church
and worship my lord.
after worship, i also went to the ha jung's chicken store because mi ja lee that ha juns's mom invited me
chicken was very delicious that was free of bone so that is very convinent!!
after diner, i and kun hee went to play soccer
day's temperature was warm but evening's temperature was so cold
soccer is always fun
i will play soccer tommorow
i went to the church
and worship my lord.
after worship, i also went to the ha jung's chicken store because mi ja lee that ha juns's mom invited me
chicken was very delicious that was free of bone so that is very convinent!!
after diner, i and kun hee went to play soccer
day's temperature was warm but evening's temperature was so cold
soccer is always fun
i will play soccer tommorow
Sentences have to begin with capital letter.
And my name isn't ha juns~!
Ha jung....ㅠㅠ
and worshiped my lord.
Past tense needed
After worship I went to Ha Jung's chicken store because Ha Jungs's mom, Mi Ja Lee, invited me.
Capitals on names
The chicken was very delicious and it was bone-free, which was very convenient!
After dinner, Kun Hee and I went to play soccer.
The day's temperature was warm, but the evening's temperature was so cold.
It was hot in the day, yet the evening was cold.
I went to church
and worshipped my Lord.// and worshipped God.
After worship, I went to Ha Jung's chicken shop/store because Mi Ja Lee, Ha Jung's mom, invited me.
No need for "also", because afterwards you only went to the chicken shop.
i will play soccer tomorrow (too).