Chosing a book for bedtime

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Apr 11, 2012 09:15
I don't know what to write about, so I will talk of the book I have just read with my three years old son for bedtime. I occasionnaly try to read him (and his brother and sister) English's book, so today, we readed some poems of R.L. Stevenson in a book illustrated by Tasha Tudor. It's all childhood poems. I don't understand all the words, but I tried to translate the best I could. It doesn't matter for now, but I will do better in some months, with more practise. Maybe it was more difficult because the poems was writing about one century ago.
I prefer to read him stories than poems.
aanc4251
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Apr 11, 2012 09:28
  • Chosing a book for bedtime

  • Choosing a book for bedtime

 
  • I don't know what to write about, so I will talk of the book I have just read with my three years old son for bedtime.

  • I don't know what to write about, so I will talk about the book I have just read with my three years old son for bedtime.

 
  • I occasionnaly try to read him (and his brother and sister) English's book, so today, we readed some poems of R.

  • I occaisionally try to read to him (and his brother and sister) English's books, so today, we readed some poems of R.

 
  • It doesn't matter for now, but I will do better in some months, with more practise.

  • It doesn't matter for now, but I will do better in some months, with more practice.

 
  • Maybe it was more difficult because the poems was writing about one century ago.

  • Maybe it was more difficult because the poems were written about one century ago.

 

Poems are quite difficult to understand even as a native speaker. Please tell us about some bedtime stories you tell your children, I wonder if they are the same in your country too! :)

Looking forward to it!~

Apr 12, 2012 00:18 Chocolatebox
Thank you! They like classics like Goldilocks and the Three Bears, Little Red Riding Hood, etc. Or I choose books with brightful illustrations. :)
mari36
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Apr 11, 2012 09:30
  • Chosing a book for bedtime

  • Choosing a book for bedtime

 
  • I occasionnaly try to read him (and his brother and sister) English's book, so today, we readed some poems of R.

  • I occasionally try to read him (and his brother and sister) English books, so today, we readed some poems by R.

 
  • It's all childhood poems.

  • They are all poems about childhood / poems for children.

 
  • Maybe it was more difficult because the poems was writing about one century ago.

  • Maybe it was more difficult because the poems were written about one/a century ago.

 
mari36
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Apr 11, 2012 09:31
  • I don't know what to write about, so I will talk of the book I have just read with my three years old son for bedtime.

  • I don't know what to write about, so I will talk about the book I have just read with my three-year-old son for bedtime.

 

Apr 12, 2012 00:18 Chocolatebox
Thank you!! :)
David
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Apr 11, 2012 16:45
  • I don't know what to write about, so I will talk of the book I have just read with my three years old son for bedtime.

  • I don't know what to write about, so I will talk of about the book I have just read with my three years old son for bedtime.

 
  • I occasionnaly try to read him (and his brother and sister) English's book, so today, we readed some poems of R.

  • I occasionnaly try to read to him, his brother and sister, (and his brother and sister) English books, so today, we readed some poems of R.

 
  • It's all childhood poems.

  • It's all childhood poems.They are all poems for children/ children's poems

 
  • I don't understand all the words, but I tried to translate the best I could.

  • I don't understand all the words, but I tried to translate the best I could. I translated them as well as I could.

 
  • It doesn't matter for now, but I will do better in some months, with more practise.

  • It doesn't matter for now, but I will do better/ improve in some the coming months, with more practise.

 
  • Maybe it was more difficult because the poems was writing about one century ago.

  • Maybe it was they more difficult because the poems was writing were written about one a century ago.

 
  • I prefer to read him stories than poems.

  • I prefer to read him stories than poems.

 

Apr 12, 2012 00:18 Chocolatebox
Thank you again! :)

Apr 12, 2012 03:17 David
No problem :)
David
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Apr 11, 2012 19:15
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