Miki
Last login: More than 3 days ago
- Native language
- Japanese
- Learning
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English
| ID |
37923 |
| Real name |
Miki
|
| Age |
21
|
| Birthday |
7/31
|
| Nation and region |
Japan
|
| Sex |
Female
|
| Occupation |
student
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Points:
63 / 500
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dev
- The next day, We went to the Takasaki mountain and the aquarium.
- The next day, we went to the Takasaki mountain and the aquarium.
その他
Mar 28th 2009 13:34
dev
- This picture is me.
- This picture is of me.
前置詞
Mar 28th 2009 13:33
dev
- The first day, We went to the tour of hot water from hell.
- The first day, We went for a tour of the "hot water from hell".
dev
- I've been away on our trip a hot-spring resort in Beppu for 2 days.
- I've been away on a trip to a hot-spring resort in Beppu for 2 days.
Lene
- Because I will have to get up very early tomorrow, I'm going to sleep.
- Because I will have to get up very early tomorrow, I'm going to sleep. (I'm going to sleep (now/soon) because I have to get up early tomorrow sounds more natural)
文法
Mar 25th 2009 13:08
Lene
- After I left my friend's house, I acquired a perm during my visit to the hair salon because my hair was straight hair.
- After I left my friend's house, I acquired got a perm during my visit to at the hair salon, because my hair was straight hair. (What kind of perm did you get? Curly?)
文法
Mar 25th 2009 13:08
Lene
- I went to my friend's house and made a tomorrow's travel plan.
- I went to my friend's house and made a tomorrow's travel plans.
複数形
Mar 25th 2009 13:05
Ben
- Because I will have to get up very early tomorrow, I'm going to sleep.
- Because I will have to get up very early tomorrow, I'm going to sleep soon. （I will go to sleep soonも自然です）
文法
Mar 25th 2009 13:05
Ben
- I'm so amazed that I charged over 10,000 yen to get them.
- I'm so amazed that I was charged over 10,000 yen to get them.
時制
Mar 25th 2009 13:04
Ben
- In addition, we will visit the sightseeing spot.
- In addition, we will visit the sightseeing spots. （Sを加えたら、ほかの添削より自然ですよ。ほかの添削を無視してください！）
複数形
Mar 25th 2009 13:04
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