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Had a bad day

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March 31th, 2009
This afternoon,in the class of design,I had shown my works which I have spent several days finishing it,and I explained it to my teacher and classmates.But,It finally got a bad result.I didn't know how to explain it naturally,I was nervous in front of them,and the teacher almost asked me some terrible question so that I had no idea of them.So,I have lostmy face in class.After all,It cost my a few days complete it,I had done my best.I almost quarreled with him at that time.What a bad temperrament!He made me annoyed.I came back to my site without any words.
Maybe It was my fault,he is my teacher,after all.I should respect him first.I should have accepted my mistakes honesty.Teacher is teacher,I had gone away too far.
Mar 31st 2009 22:33 尚禮

  • This afternoon,in the class of design,I had shown my works which I have spent several days finishing it,and I explained it to my teacher and classmates.
  • This afternoon in my design class I presented my works that I had spent several days finishing. and I explained it to my teacher and classmates.
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  • But,It finally got a bad result.
  • In the end though I received a low grade.
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  • I didn't know how to explain it naturally,I was nervous in front of them,and the teacher almost asked me some terrible question so that I had no idea of them.
  • I didn't know how to explain it naturally and was nervous in front of them. The teacher asked me some terrible questions that I had no idea how to answer.
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  • So,I have lostmy face in class.
  • So I lost face in class. (丢面子能翻译成 "to lose face")
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  • After all,It cost my a few days complete it,I had done my best.
  • After all, it cost me a few days to complete. I had done my best.
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  • What a bad temperrament!He made me annoyed.
  • I felt so frustrated. (这么说听起来相对更自然一些。)
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  • I came back to my site without any words.
  • my site = ?
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  • Maybe It was my fault,he is my teacher,after all.
  • Maybe It was my fault. He is my teacher, after all.
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  • I should respect him first.
  • I should respect him first and foremost.
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  • I should have accepted my mistakes honesty.
  • I should have honestly accepted my mistakes. (honestly 在这里应该当副词。)
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  • Teacher is teacher,I had gone away too far.
  • The teacher is the teacher, and I had gone away too far.
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We all all get low scores on assignments sometimes. Try not to feel so bad about it. :)
Apr 01st 2009 13:25 viva

Thank you for your corrections.
我正在反思这件事 How to say it in english.
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