Peter Pan and Wendy

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Mar 31, 2012 00:17
One of my favorite movie is Peter Pan of Walt Disney♥

I wanna buy some Peter Pan goods, but they are rarely sold in Disney store.

I love both the movie of Peter Pan and Peter Pan2(return to the Neverland).

I like Peter's face. I like his eyes that slany down toward the nose, and turned-up nose:D

Since Disney's Peter Pan only depicts a part of the whole story, I guess, I started to read a book written by J.M.Barrie. Of course English version:)

Now, I am reading chapter2. Peter left his shadow.

I'm accustomed to understand the writing and humore of the author, but sometimes it's very hard to get them.

What I'm concerning is that whether Disney's Peter Pan true to the original story. I sometimes feel enxiety.What if the true story is cruel like the Grim Brother's fairy tales???

I continue to read, any way;D



Kim
Thank you for your correction!
Mar 31, 2012 00:29
  • One of my favorite movie is Peter Pan of Walt Disney♥

  • One of my favorite movies is Peter Pan of Walt Disney♥

    Movies is plural because you are talking about one movie out of many.

 
  • I wanna buy some Peter Pan goods, but they are rarely sold in Disney store.

  • I want to buy some Peter Pan goods, but they are rarely sold in the Disney store.

    "Wanna" is typically not used in formal writing; it would be "want to."

 
  • I like his eyes that slany down toward the nose, and turned-up nose:D

  • I like his eyes that slant down toward the nose, and turned-up nose:D

 
  • Of course English version:)

  • Of course, it is the English version:)

    Or maybe: Of course, I am reading the English version.

 
  • I'm accustomed to understand the writing and humore of the author, but sometimes it's very hard to get them.

  • I'm accustomed to understand the writing and humor of the author, but sometimes it's very hard to get them.

 
  • What I'm concerning is that whether Disney's Peter Pan true to the original story.

  • What I'm concerned about, is that whether Disney's Peter Pan is true to the original story or not.

 
  • I sometimes feel enxiety.

  • I sometimes feel anxiety.

 
  • I continue to read, any way;D

  • I continue to read anyway. ;D

    In this instance, anyway is all one word.

 

Mar 31, 2012 01:15 Sianna
Thank you so much:)) I tend to mistake "I am concerning", because when I use "worry", I can write "I am worring". "-ed" and "-ing" are mixed up in my brain...
Taro
Thank you for your correction!
Apr 3, 2012 00:27
  • Now, I am reading chapter2.

  • Now, I am reading chapter 2.

 
  • I continue to read, any way;D

  • I'll continue to read, anyway;D

    That's the spirit.

 

Apr 3, 2012 23:27 Sianna
Thank you:)
I learned the mean of " that's the spirit":) as well. There are many idiom in English. I have to remenber...
Thank you anyway:D
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