Feel tired from the bottom of my heart
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I wrote a letter to mom after getting up this morning.I really fascinates this traditional way of communication and enjoy the time when I'm writing with a pen.
Today is Saturday,actually,we don't have much assignment to be done.But as you are on the campus,you can't relax for a second.The intangible pressure is everywhere and lazyness will take you to fail.Also,some senior students will ask us for help which we can't refuse.
It's really tired to spend a day.
Today is Saturday,actually,we don't have much assignment to be done.But as you are on the campus,you can't relax for a second.The intangible pressure is everywhere and lazyness will take you to fail.Also,some senior students will ask us for help which we can't refuse.
It's really tired to spend a day.

I am really fascinated by this traditional way of communication and enjoy the time when I'm writing with a pen.
Today is Saturday,actually, we don't have much assignment to do.
But as we are at the campus, we can't relax even for a second.
When you use the first person at the beginning of the paragraph, you have to be consistent with it.
The intangible pressure is everywhere and lazyness will make us fail.
Also,some senior students will ask us for help and we can't refuse them.
It's really a tiring way to spend the day.
Feeling tired from the bottom of my heart
I am really fascinated by this traditional way of communicating and enjoy the times when I'm writing with a pen.
Today is Saturday, and we don't have many assignments to do.
But as we're on campus, we can't relax even for a second.
Also, senior students sometimes ask us for help which we can't refuse. (this sentence is okay both ways though)
It's a really tiring way to spend a day.
I scribbled a letter to mom after dragging my bones out of bed this morning.
This tradition method of communicating really fascinates me and enjoy the time when I'm writing with a pen.
Active voice is more interesting that passive voice.
Active voice captures the attention of the reader than passive voice.
What's the difference?
Passive verbs are words that are forms of "to be" such as is, are, was were, maybe, can be, etc.
Active verbs show action not "being" such as fascinates, captures, thrills, excites, etc. You can learn to make your writing more fun and interesting to read if you use active voice and active verbs. It took me 40 years to learn how to do this, but EVERY professional writer learns this trick.