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Yesterday,I finished my two-day part time job.
It was a market investigation (is it a accurate statement?)about Tangyuan's taste.(Tangyuan is a kind of dumpling.) The questionnaire isn't thin.Everyone lasted 10-15mins.We cooked tangyuan thoroughly at the spot.When the daily work finished,we ate out the rest of tangyuan .
Tere were lot of companies do the matket investigationa at the same time.So,when I finished my daily works,I acted as consumer to write other questionnaires.In this way ,I got some little gifts.
I know there are many mistakes and Chinglish.So please help me.And if there are any more native expression let me know.Or if you were me,how would you express?Thanks a lot~~~~
It was a market investigation (is it a accurate statement?)about Tangyuan's taste.(Tangyuan is a kind of dumpling.) The questionnaire isn't thin.Everyone lasted 10-15mins.We cooked tangyuan thoroughly at the spot.When the daily work finished,we ate out the rest of tangyuan .
Tere were lot of companies do the matket investigationa at the same time.So,when I finished my daily works,I acted as consumer to write other questionnaires.In this way ,I got some little gifts.
I know there are many mistakes and Chinglish.So please help me.And if there are any more native expression let me know.Or if you were me,how would you express?Thanks a lot~~~~
昨天，我结束了为期两天的兼职工作。
这是一个关于汤圆口味的市场调查。调查问卷不算薄。每一个问卷都要进行10到15分钟。我们把汤圆现场煮熟。完成每天的工作后，我们会把剩下的汤圆吃掉。
跟我们同时，有很多公司也在做市场调查.所以完成日常工作后我就被拉去别的家做问卷。不过这样也得了一些小礼物，还不错。
这是一个关于汤圆口味的市场调查。调查问卷不算薄。每一个问卷都要进行10到15分钟。我们把汤圆现场煮熟。完成每天的工作后，我们会把剩下的汤圆吃掉。
跟我们同时，有很多公司也在做市场调查.所以完成日常工作后我就被拉去别的家做问卷。不过这样也得了一些小礼物，还不错。
Yesterday, I finished my two-day part time job.
逗号后面要空格
It was a market investigation (is it an accurate statement?) about tangyuan's taste (tangyuan is a kind of dumpling). The questionnaire isn't short. ~or~ The questionnaire isn't small.
如果在圆括号后面有个词汇，圆括号后面也要空格，可是如果有句号，不要个空格，Here are examples:
圆括号后面有词汇：It was a market investigation (is it an accurate statement?) about Tanguan's taste.
圆括号后面有句号或者其他的标点（比如逗号---这下两个句子圆括号后面没有一个空格）: It was a market investigation (is it an accurate statement?).
When we left 家常烹调 (my favorite restaurant), I felt very sad.
我觉得因为tangyuan不是专有名词，别打扩了。那个词”thin“这个情况不用，换用“short”或者“small”，它们都可以，都好听。
Everyone took 10-15 mins.
We cooked tangyuan thoroughly on the spot.
不着说thoroughly。这个情况要"on"
When the daily work finished, we ate out the rest of the tangyuan.
There were lots of companies doing the market investigation at the same time.
So, when I finished my work for the day, I pretended to be a consumer and wrote other questionnaires.
This one sounds more natural. 更口语的、正常的
In This way, I got some little gifts.
sneaky :)
Or if you were me, how would you express? Thanks a lot~~~~
You said, you pretended to be a consumer and wrote some queationnaires for the gift?