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Jun 20th 2012 08:10
The typhoon hit Tokyo last night.
Fortunately, I could get off work earlier than usual, so I could be at home when the wind was the most strong.
Today, the weather is so clear after a typhoon has passed.
I think that life is like the weather, beause sometimes it is fantastic, and sometimes it is awful.
moccachino
Thank you for your correction!
Jun 20th 2012 13:32
  • The typhoon hit Tokyo last night.

  • A typhoon hit Tokyo last night.

 
  • Fortunately, I could get off work earlier than usual, so I could be at home when the wind was the most strong.

  • Fortunately, I could get off work earlier than usual, so I could be at home when the wind was strongest

    You're grammar is correct, but in English we use strongest for 'most strong' / weakest for 'most weak'- it's more natural

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  • Today, the weather is so clear after a typhoon has passed.

  • Today, the weather is so clear because a typhoon has passed. / The weather following the typhoon is so clear

 
I've never experienced a typhoon before. I'm glad you were safe at home when it hit Tokyo
Jun 20th 2012 17:47 kota
Thank you for your corrections! Your comnents are really good help to me.
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