Could you check my diary? pleeeeeeeeeeeease.

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Jun 12th 2012 12:18

This 5 times, my diary was not checked by someone.
I wonder It's not interesting or it's really right?
I'm an idiotic optimist, so I'll have a mistake that my English is good enough.

この5回ほど、日記の添削がされてない。
全然面白くないのか、本当に正しいからなのか？
能天気な性格なので、英語がいけてるのだと勘違いしてしまいます。

Earthwormfan

Thank you for your correction!

Jun 12th 2012 12:28

This 5 times, my diary was not checked by someone.
This 5 times is the fifth time my diary was not checked by someone anyone!

"This is the fifth time my diary was not checked by anyone!

I wonder It's not interesting or it's really right?
I wonder if It's not interesting or if it's really right.

"I wonder if It's not interesting or if It's really right."

Note: only use question marks with questions. If you 'wonder', you aren't asking a direct question.

I'm an idiotic optimist, so I'll have a mistake that my English is good enough.
I'm an idiotic optimist, so I'll have a mistake just assume that my English is good enough.

どうぞ　:)