初投稿です！
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初投稿なので自己紹介からしようと思います。
私は東京にある大学に通う大学2年生です。
日本には様々なサブカルチャーがあります。
その中にVocaloidという音楽があります。
Vocaloidには初音ミクなどがあり、パソコン上で歌詞とメロディーを入力すると歌ってくれます。
私はそれに興味があり近々曲を作りたいと思っています。
作曲は難しそうですが自分の能力を伸ばすためにも頑張りたいです。
自分の作った曲を誰かに聞いてもらえるなんてワクワクしませんか？
I think to be introduce myself because I contribute here for the first time.
I am a university student who go to a university in Tokyo.
There are some subculture in Japan.
There is the music of "Vocaloid" in it.
The Vocaloid ,including Hatune Miku, can sing by entering lyric and melody on the computer.
I am interested in it so I think to write music soon.
The composition may be difficult.
But I keep trying for bring out my ability.
Aren't you excited that anyone can listen the music you write?
Thank you.
私は東京にある大学に通う大学2年生です。
日本には様々なサブカルチャーがあります。
その中にVocaloidという音楽があります。
Vocaloidには初音ミクなどがあり、パソコン上で歌詞とメロディーを入力すると歌ってくれます。
私はそれに興味があり近々曲を作りたいと思っています。
作曲は難しそうですが自分の能力を伸ばすためにも頑張りたいです。
自分の作った曲を誰かに聞いてもらえるなんてワクワクしませんか？
I think to be introduce myself because I contribute here for the first time.
I am a university student who go to a university in Tokyo.
There are some subculture in Japan.
There is the music of "Vocaloid" in it.
The Vocaloid ,including Hatune Miku, can sing by entering lyric and melody on the computer.
I am interested in it so I think to write music soon.
The composition may be difficult.
But I keep trying for bring out my ability.
Aren't you excited that anyone can listen the music you write?
Thank you.
I am thinking to be about introducing myself because I contribute here for the first time.
I am a (university) student who go to is studying in a university in Tokyo.OR I am a (university) student studying in a university in Tokyo.
There is one thing called subculture in Japan.
I am interested in it so I think want to write music soon.
But I will keep trying for bring out my ability.
Sorry for that I’m not a native speaker. I hope it can help.
ありがとうございました＾＾
I think I will introduce myself because I am contributing here for the first time.
The 'I will' means the same thing as the correction before. You need to write "I am contributing" because you are doing it as you speak.
In Japan, the music of "Vocaloid" has become a subculture.
Every country has subculture, so I don't think you need to write this sentence. Instead you should join it with the next one. I said 'has become a subculture' because it is something that only became popular recently.
The Vocaloid, including Hatsune Miku, can sing by entering the lyrics and melody on the computer.
The つ in 初音 is 'tsu'. You don't have to use 'the' in this sentence but you can, so I put it there. There is more than one 'lyric' in a song so that means you use 'lyrics' (plural).
I am interested in it so I think to write music for it soon.
You are writing 'for the vocaloid' so you should make it clear. Otherwise it sounds like you are writing music for another reason.
The composition may be difficult but I will keep trying to bring out my ability
I think you should join these two sentences because they are directly related.
but I will keep trying to bring out my ability
But I keep trying to bring out my ability.
You use 'to' to show what the result will be.
Aren't you excited that anyone can listen to the music that you write?
えーと、ヴォカロイドは外国人まで有名ですよ。 私も作った曲が好きです。すべてのキャラがすきですが 特にリンとレンです。
Good luck with your song writing!(＠⌒ー⌒＠)ノ
ボーカロイド知ってるんですか！？
感激です！！！
好きな曲あったら教えてください＾＾