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Nowaday, many students have problems in mental health because of high pressure. So it is necessary for us to pay attention to students' mental health.
Colleges, as an important part of students' lives, should take measure to solve the problems. On the one hand, we can set mental healthy classes for students so they can learn some knowledge about mental health. On the other hand, there should be a place where is used to give out the pressure.
At the same time, we students must balance the mental health, too. All things come from heart, so if we have a strong and peaceful heart, we will keep away from mental health problems.
(this is a topic writing about students' mental health.Actually, I didn't write enough words,so if you have some good and easy sentenses whici is fit for this topic ,please write down too.)
Thanks for your help~ :)
Colleges, as an important part of students' lives, should take measure to solve the problems. On the one hand, we can set mental healthy classes for students so they can learn some knowledge about mental health. On the other hand, there should be a place where is used to give out the pressure.
At the same time, we students must balance the mental health, too. All things come from heart, so if we have a strong and peaceful heart, we will keep away from mental health problems.
(this is a topic writing about students' mental health.Actually, I didn't write enough words,so if you have some good and easy sentenses whici is fit for this topic ,please write down too.)
Thanks for your help~ :)
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Colleges, as an important part of students' lives, should take measures to solve these problems.
On the one hand, we can set-up mental healthy classes for students so they can learn something knowledge about mental health.
On the other hand, there should be a place where to vent out the pressure.
At the same time, we students must balance our mental health, too.
All things come from the heart, so if we have a strong and peaceful heart, we will keep from mental health problems away.
Nowadays, many students have problems withn mental health dbecause to lots of high pressure.
Just a couple of grammatical changes to make it flow better. If you wanted another sentence you could explain where students are getting pressure from and maybe a reference to research with results about this.
So it is necessary for us to pay more attention to students' mental health.
Adds emphasis
Colleges, as an important part of students' lives, should take measures to solve these problems.
On the one hand, we can set up mental healthy information classes for students so that they can learn somethi knowledge about menthisal issuhealth.
Replaced the second 'mental health' because it becomes too much to just use it twice
On the other hand, there should be a place where ist udsend tso can givent out the pressure.
At the same time, we students must also balance ourthe mental health, too.
Balance the mental health with what?
All things come from the heart, so if weit haveis a strong and peaceful heart, we will keep away from mental health problems at bay.
Flows better this way :)
Thank you very much~:)