The Voice-American TV Show
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=Would you check the senteces below for me?
The Voice is an American TV show where the challengers who dream strongly to become a singer compete against each other.
Recently I really absorbed in watchig "The Voice" .
I am really excited to watch it every weekend.
My favorite entry is Juliet Simms.
For me, she is not only an amazing singer but also a tanleted artist.
If you don't know her yet, please check her songs on youtube.
I have 2 favorites, one is "Roxanne " and the other is "It's a man's man's man's world."
Her voice is so soulful and touching.
When I listen to her songs I always can not help being into the song' world.
Watching The Voice, I learned that there are many types of singers.
And I noticed that I love singers who can express song's world in an artistic way on a stage.
The Voice is an American TV show where the challengers who dream strongly to become a singer compete against each other.
Recently I really absorbed in watchig "The Voice" .
I am really excited to watch it every weekend.
My favorite entry is Juliet Simms.
For me, she is not only an amazing singer but also a tanleted artist.
If you don't know her yet, please check her songs on youtube.
I have 2 favorites, one is "Roxanne " and the other is "It's a man's man's man's world."
Her voice is so soulful and touching.
When I listen to her songs I always can not help being into the song' world.
Watching The Voice, I learned that there are many types of singers.
And I noticed that I love singers who can express song's world in an artistic way on a stage.

=Would you check these senteces sentences below for me?
The Voice is an American TV show where the challengers who dream strongly to become a singers compete against each other.
Recently I got really absorbed in watching "The Voice" .
My favorite entry participant is Juliet Simms.
According to For me, she is not only an amazing singer but also a tanlented artist.
When I listen to her songs I always can not help being into the song' music world.
And I noticed that I love singers who can express song's the music world in an artistic way on a stage.
Please keep up the good work. ^^
I misspelled many words....thank you very much for your checking.
And I can use "participant" and " according to me" next time.
Thank you^^
The Voice is an American TV show where the challengers who dream of becoming singers compete against each other.
This way it's more natural.
My favorite contestant is Juliet Simms.
You can use "participant", but "contestant" puts the focus on the fact that they are competing against each other.
"dream of ~ing "、よく使えそうな表現を教えてくれてありがとう!
"contestant"の意味も分かりました^^ ありがとうございました。