Please correct my sentence in English
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I need to ask USA campany by e-mail so please correct my words !
I am user DP(some foftware).
Chould I ask some.
when the DP8 will be on sell(shipping?)
though you anounced that DP8 is coming in spring
Now its already early summer!!!
I think you shoudl notice for all users of DP that sorry for waitting and when that will come.
thank you
that it!!
I am user DP(some foftware).
Chould I ask some.
when the DP8 will be on sell(shipping?)
though you anounced that DP8 is coming in spring
Now its already early summer!!!
I think you shoudl notice for all users of DP that sorry for waitting and when that will come.
thank you
that it!!
私はアメリカの会社に問い合わせなければならないので、私の文章を添削してほしいです。
私はDPのユーザーです。質問がございます。
この春に発売するとアナウンスされている、DP8はいつ発売されるのでしょうか？
もすでに初夏です。
私は （待たせてすみません、そしていつになるのか）をユーザーに報告すべきだと思います。
ありがとうございます。
以上です。
私はDPのユーザーです。質問がございます。
この春に発売するとアナウンスされている、DP8はいつ発売されるのでしょうか？
もすでに初夏です。
私は （待たせてすみません、そしていつになるのか）をユーザーに報告すべきだと思います。
ありがとうございます。
以上です。
I need to ask USA campany by e-mail so please correct my words !
company.
I am user DP(some foftware).
software
Chould I ask some.
Should. Or could. I don't know which one your using.
when the DP8 will be on sell(shipping?)
When will the DP8 be on sell?
though you anounced that DP8 is coming in spring
You announced that the DP8 would be coming in spring, but it is already early summer.
I think you shoudl notice for all users of DP that sorry for waitting and when that will come.
I think you should notify all DP users that your sorry for making them wait and let them know when it will come.
Please correct my sentences in English
I need to ask a USA company by e-mail, so please correct what I've written!
I am a user of DP (some software).
Could I ask some questions?
When will the DP8 be on sale (shipping?)
Though you announced that DP8 is coming in spring
it is already early summer now!!!
I think you should inform all users of DP when it will come out, and apologize for the wait.
(apologise = apologise = to say sorry)
(inform = to give someone notice)
I am using DP(some software).or I am a DP user
Could I ask someone. or I am asking
when the DP8 will be on sale(shipping?)or available
It was announced that DP8 is coming out in spring
But now it's already early summer!!!
I think you should tell all users of DP that you apologize for the wait and when DP8 will actually be released.
Thank you