Oct 04th 2012 12:11 markbellis made 1 corrections for What role should the United...
Good!

Oct 03rd 2012 14:04 ddraiggoch88 made 13 corrections for What role should the United...
Excellent writing, and I agree with your points in here! Keep up the good work!

Oct 02nd 2012 23:23 Phro made 2 corrections for Do The Rich Have A Responsi...
Your writing was excellent, but I had some difficulty following your logic. I think, perhaps, you might need to provide a slightly more e...

Sep 30th 2012 07:58 Stephanie commented on Should Drug Companies Provi...
I don't see any grammatical errors, and it flows very nicely :)

Sep 29th 2012 12:34 LaihanMagTulog made 4 corrections for Should Democratic Nations C...
Wow, you're english is pretty good! Keep up the good work!

Sep 28th 2012 11:40 markbellis made 6 corrections for Will Globalization Result i...
Good!

Sep 25th 2012 11:52 markbellis made 3 corrections for Is The Increasing Number of...
Good!

Sep 24th 2012 13:46 Steven commented on Is Tradition Always Worth P...
I don't think so. I don't think tradition is always worth preserving.

Sep 20th 2012 20:53 Baha / バハ =) made 3 corrections for Is Alcohol Consumption Amon...
Yes it is a big deal but I don't think that the problem could be solved that easily, teenagers are influenced by what they see in the...

Sep 20th 2012 20:45 Baha / バハ =) made 7 corrections for Which Is Bigger Threat to S...
Well written Chiaki-san! Keep up the good work!

Sep 20th 2012 20:39 Baha / バハ =) made 4 corrections for Is The Study of Ancient Civ...
I like the way you write essays, very concise and specific without any other unneccesary information. がんばってください　Chiakiさん！

Sep 13th 2012 09:42 ep made 5 corrections for " Honesty" Is Th...
I think the hardest part is knowing when it is appropriate to speak honestly, or just knowing the best way to speak honestly depending on...

Sep 13th 2012 09:24 ep made 3 corrections for Should Students Be Asked to...
Wow. Great essay. Very clear and concise. That's usually how we like our essays to be in the US. Is that how essays are usually writt...

Sep 12th 2012 17:35 Baha / バハ =) made 6 corrections for Should Students Be Asked to...
Good work Chiaki-san! By the way from where do you get the ideas for such topics?

Sep 12th 2012 14:49 tsnepseg made 3 corrections for Should Students Be Asked to...
完璧！質問があれば聞いてください。:-)

Sep 11th 2012 14:05 moonfall made 13 corrections for " Honesty" Is Th...
This is pretty good! Well done.

Sep 11th 2012 01:22 Dan made 5 corrections for Would Transferring More Tec...
We should also not exploit developing countries' natural resources. だよ！？

Sep 08th 2012 11:34 mattaaron79 made 9 corrections for Should Suffrage Be Granted ...
Your English is obviously very good! Keep at it!

Sep 07th 2012 23:02 Baha / バハ =) made 3 corrections for Can Japan's Eco-point ...
Wow what a neat system but do people get something in return for acquiring these points? Some rewards maybe?

Sep 07th 2012 19:57 markbellis made 6 corrections for The Pros And Cons of Having...
Good!

Sep 05th 2012 23:02 Baha / バハ =) made 10 corrections for Can Hard Work And Determina...
Well written Chiaki-san! Keep up the good work!

Sep 05th 2012 10:37 markbellis commented on Are Printed Books And Newsp...
Looks OK!

Sep 05th 2012 10:30 markbellis made 3 corrections for Can The Government Be Trust...
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Sep 03rd 2012 10:48 markbellis made 1 corrections for Can Japan Effectively Reduc...
Good!

Sep 03rd 2012 09:50 markbellis made 2 corrections for Should University Education...
Very good!

Sep 01st 2012 19:40 Ongoingwhy made 19 corrections for Is The Declining Population...
Your English is really good!

Sep 01st 2012 11:20 markbellis made 6 corrections for Is Government Action The K...
Good!

Aug 31st 2012 11:35 Angeldust made 6 corrections for Should Children Carry Cellp...
Good job! I agree with you. My mom wouldn't let me have a cell phone until I could pay for it myself. That taught me to be responsibl...

Aug 30th 2012 11:40 Angeldust made 6 corrections for Does music play a positive ...
Hello! Your last sentences were very good! This was a fun essay to read and you did a great job, only a few mistakes. :) It seems that m...

Aug 29th 2012 12:43 Angeldust made 3 corrections for Should Potentially Dangerou...
That is an interesting essay assignment!

Aug 29th 2012 09:46 lorenzokun made 11 corrections for Should Potentially Dangerou...
Overall, I think that was pretty well written and you were very close to getting it right a lot of the time! Most of the things I added w...

Aug 28th 2012 10:33 EricW made 7 corrections for Does Japan's Health-Car...
This time, I used red for grammar corrections and blue for small spelling corrections. If a patient pays the hospital or the pharmacy ...

Aug 27th 2012 20:15 Baha / バハ =) made 10 corrections for Is The Extensive Media Cov...
Yes I agree and nowadays this should be aimed mostly to the younger generation through the means of the Internet

Aug 26th 2012 04:43 Derek made 15 corrections for The pros and cons of zoos a...
This is an interesting topic to write an essay about. Good work :P

Aug 25th 2012 11:55 markbellis made 4 corrections for Is Japan Likely to Become M...
Good!

Aug 24th 2012 10:04 ntan1 made 7 corrections for Is There Enough Emphasis on...
Yeah, this question is a harder one. To directly answer it, you probably have to basically show that people either do or do not spend eno...

Aug 23rd 2012 11:54 markbellis made 1 corrections for Is the Internet Destroying ...
Good!

Aug 22nd 2012 15:14 EricW made 16 corrections for Does sumo have a role to pl...
Excellent! I think sumo is fascinating.

Aug 20th 2012 19:50 markbellis made 3 corrections for Is Ecotourism Good for the...
Good!

Aug 20th 2012 13:04 mtheoriex11 made 12 corrections for Would Students Benefit Stro...
Good essay. I like your use of "pushy" in the last sentence and it may be better than my change. :D

Aug 18th 2012 21:01 markbellis made 1 corrections for Is Building More Roads the ...
Good!

Aug 18th 2012 17:31 Baha / バハ =) made 8 corrections for Is Building More Roads the ...
I'm guessing the worst traffic jams are in Tokyo?

Aug 17th 2012 21:58 Baha / バハ =) made 4 corrections for Does Japan pay attention to...
Most of these people have ended up in such a situation through no fault of their own and should be helped to get back up on their feet.

Aug 17th 2012 10:38 Sam made 5 corrections for Does Japan pay attention to...
Great essay! Your English is good.

Aug 16th 2012 12:27 markbellis made 5 corrections for Does religion provide good ...
I've never understood this either, especially since people change their religion when they get married so they can have the same shri...