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Jun 25th 2012 12:20
Last year I moved Kurashiki city.
Kurashiki is a historic town in West-Japan, was known by fabric formerly.
The central location has developed as the "Bikan chiku (aesthetic zone)" and many tourists visited now.
I like to walk here with my lovely dog.




昨年私は倉敷市に引っ越しました。
倉敷は西日本のある歴史の町で、かつては繊維の町として知られていました。
その中心地は「美観地区」として整備され、たくさんの観光客が訪れています。
私はここをワンコと散歩するのが好きです。
Zaexu
Thank you for your correction!
Jun 25th 2012 12:32
  • Last year I moved Kurashiki city.

  • Last year I moved to Kurashiki city.

 
  • Kurashiki is a historic town in West-Japan, was known by fabric formerly.

  • Kurashiki is a historic town in West-Japan, it was formerly known as fabric.

 
  • The central location has developed as the "Bikan chiku (aesthetic zone)" and many tourists visited now.

  • The central location has developed as the "Bikan chiku (aesthetic zone)" and many tourists visit now.

 
Jun 25th 2012 13:00 aMicci
Thank you for your good correction! I got it!
Jun 25th 2012 13:03 Zaexu
You're very welcome! I hope you have fun learning English, and it looks like you've already gotten most of it down.
Jun 25th 2012 13:22 aMicci
Zaexuさん
ありがとうございます! 英語の勉強を楽しみます。
Zaexuさんも日本語を楽しんで下さいね!
Vermilion
Thank you for your correction!
Jun 25th 2012 12:45
  • Last year I moved Kurashiki city.

  • Last year I moved into Kurashiki city.

    moved Kurashiki だと、倉敷を動かしたです。　ちなみ　～から引っ越すは、move out です。

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  • Kurashiki is a historic town in West-Japan, was known by fabric formerly.

  • Kurashiki is a historic town in West-Japan. It was famous for its fabric formerly.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • The central location has developed as the "Bikan chiku (aesthetic zone)" and many tourists visited now.

  • The central area has been developed as the "Bikan chiku (aesthetic zone)" and many tourists visit nowadays.

1 people think this correction is good.  
It's a very nice city. I've been there once.
Jun 25th 2012 12:56 aMicci
とてもわかりやすく添削していただきありがとうございます！旅行しても壊れた英語しか使えないので、こちらで勉強させていただきたいと思い登録しました。 またよろしくお願いします。
Jun 25th 2012 13:14 Vermilion
どう致しまして。たくさん書いて、いっぱい添削してもらってください。Lang-8 楽しんでください。
Jun 25th 2012 13:17 aMicci
Vermilionさん、ありがとうございます！
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Jun 27th 2012 01:24
一緒にがんばれ、日本語は楽しみです、日本語を勉強しても二年となる、well, my japanese is still toooooooooooo bad, hope u can have a great advance in English, so do I, in my Japanese~
Jun 27th 2012 09:31 aMicci
唐酱さん、コメントをありがとうございます！
一緒にがんばりましょう♪
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