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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of realizer's latest journal entries Apr 13th 2009 23:36
Hellow.
こんにちは。

My handle name is "realizer."
僕のハンドルネームは「realizer」です。

I'm 18 years old.
18歳です。

I go to university every day.
毎日大学に行ってます。

Please don't laugh and say "your English is too childish for your age."
「君の英語は幼稚だな!」なんて笑って言わないでください。

I think young Japanese people mostly use Engrish as well as I.
僕が思うに、たいてい日本の若者が使う英語なんて僕が使う英語と同じぐらいのうまさです。



.......It is a little much.
ちょっと言いすぎました。

I realize my English is very very poor.
僕は自分の英語がつたない(うまくない)ことを自覚(分かって、了解して)います。

But, I hope everybody who see here correct my diary gently.
しかし、僕はここを見てくれたみんなが親切に日記の添削をしてくれることを望んでいます。
Apr 14th 2009 01:44 Yu

  • Hellow.
  • Hellow.
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  • I think young Japanese people mostly use Engrish as well as I.
  • I think most young Japanese people mostly use English as well as I.
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  • But, I hope everybody who see here correct my diary gently.
  • But, I hope everybody who sees it here will correct my diary gently.
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Good job!

I think everyone starting out in a language will sound childish at first. Let's get better together! :D
Apr 14th 2009 01:45 Miguel

  • Hellow.
  • Hellow.
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  • My handle name is "realizer."
  • My handle name is "realizer."
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  • I think young Japanese people mostly use Engrish as well as I.
  • I think many young Japanese people, including me, mostly use English as well as I.
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  • It is a little much.
  • It is a little too much.
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  • But, I hope everybody who see here correct my diary gently.
  • However, I hope everybody who sees here correct my diary corrects it gently. "But" should not be at the beginning of a sentence.
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Hello, have fun here, and thank you for your corrections!
Apr 14th 2009 01:46 Tim

  • Start lang-8
  • Starting lang-8
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  • Hellow.
  • Hellow.
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  • I go to university every day.
  • I go to university every day. I am a university student. (この文章は間違っていませんが、こっちの方が自然だと思います)
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  • I think young Japanese people mostly use Engrish as well as I.
  • I think that most Japanese youngsters have about the same level of English as me.
1 people think this correction is good. Comment  

  • It is a little much.
  • However,
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  • I realize my English is very very poor.
  • I realize that my English is very very poor.
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  • But, I hope everybody who see here correct my diary gently.
  • But, I hope everybody who reads this will kindly correct my diary .
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私の日記の投稿を添削してありがとうございます。

初めてのLang-8での日記おめでとう!
外国語で日記を書く人はすばらしいだと思います。
Realiserさんの描いている英語は十分理解できました。

ほとんどの添削は文章をもっと自然にするようにしました。
文法とかは大丈夫です。

英語の勉強を頑張ってください。

ティム。
Apr 14th 2009 08:58 taniwha

  • It is a little much.
  • It isI said a little too much.
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Everything else was good or already corrected.

Finding a way to enjoy learning English will make it easier. It will become such that you will forget that you are learning.
Apr 14th 2009 19:43 realizer


I even mistook some spellings.

I'm ashamed of myself.

I'd like to express my sincerest thanks for everyone !
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