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Jul 4, 2012 11:58
Hello!
It is past the days from I started this.
English is very diddicult for me.
So I thaught of a idea that I write daialy here.
I am happy if you correct and teach me.
こんにちわ！
このサイトを初めて何日かたちました。
英語は難しいです。
なのでここで毎日日記を書くことを思い付きました。
添削して頂けたり教えて頂けたらうれしいです。
ili
Jul 4, 2012 12:05
  • It is past the days from I started this.

  • It is past the days from I started this.Its been days since I started this.

 
  • English is very diddicult for me.

  • English is very diddicult for me.English is very difficult for me.

 
  • So I thaught of a idea that I write daialy here.

  • So I thaught of a idea that I write daialy here.So I've got an idea, I think I should write a daily journal.

 

Jul 4, 2012 12:13 もる
Thank you! Your correct is good for me^^ I must study hard..
Stallosaur
Jul 4, 2012 12:06
  • It is past the days from I started this.

  • It is past the days from I started this.

    Not sure what it is that you are trying to say here.

 
  • English is very diddicult for me.

  • English is very difficult for me.

 
  • So I thaught of a idea that I write daialy here.

  • So I thought of a idea. I will write daily here.

 
  • I am happy if you correct and teach me.

  • I will be happy if you correct and teach me.

 

Keep it up! You're on the road to success!

よくできました！

Jul 4, 2012 12:21 もる
Thank you! I do my best. Keep up! Please teach me English^^
リサ
Thank you for your correction!
Jul 4, 2012 12:20
  • It is past the days from I started this.

  • It is past the days from Many days have passed since I started this.

    Is that what you wanted to say? Here are some other options:
    Many days have passed from when I started this.
    Several days have passed from when I started this. (Several is less than many.)
    I started this many days ago. (Or several.)

    I think this next way sounds more natural:
    It's been a while since I started this.

 
  • English is very diddicult for me.

  • English is very difficult for me.

 
  • So I thaught of a idea that I write daialy here.

  • So I thought of a idea that - I should write daialy here daily.

    There are many ways to say that. Here are some other options:
    So I think that I should write here daily.
    So I think that I should write a daily journal.
    So I think that I should write a daily diary. (That looks weird - daily and diary. But it's not wrong. In a serious essay then I would write "daily journal", so they don't look the same. But in a fun story I would write "daily diary" because it looks interesting and makes me happy. )

 
  • I am happy if you correct and teach me.

  • I'll be happy if you correct and teach me.

    Or "It would make me happy if you correct and teach me."

    More natural:
    Please correct and teach me.

 

I could understand what you wanted to say. (I hope.)
So, I think you can be more confident about your English. :)

There are many mistakes in your writing. But I think that the most important thing is that people understand what you write. And you achieved that! Yay! The mistakes are less important. Well done!

It's 1 month and 1 day since I started Lang-8, and I have only just written my third diary/journal. It's very difficult and scary. I think I should write more often. Daily would be good, but for me maybe that's aiming too high. So, I'll try to write at least one entry a week.

Bye!

Jul 5, 2012 09:26 もる
Thank you very much! Your corrections and explanations are easy to understand and very useful for me.
I will not afraid mistakes, and keep writing daily diary!!
Thank you!

Jul 5, 2012 09:26 もる
Thank you very much! Your corrections and explanations are easy to understand and very useful for me.
I will not afraid mistakes, and keep writing daily diary!!
Thank you!

Jul 5, 2012 15:16 リサ
どういたしまして。 You're welcome, it was nothing.

Here is a correction of one sentence in your comment:

I won't be afraid of mistakes, and I'll keep writing a daily diary!! (or "my daily diary")
"I won't" is a more natural way of saying "I will not".

Jul 7, 2012 09:58 もる
Thank you! Your corrections are usefull for me everytime.
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