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Hello!
It is past the days from I started this.
English is very diddicult for me.
So I thaught of a idea that I write daialy here.
I am happy if you correct and teach me.
It is past the days from I started this.
English is very diddicult for me.
So I thaught of a idea that I write daialy here.
I am happy if you correct and teach me.
こんにちわ!
このサイトを初めて何日かたちました。
英語は難しいです。
なのでここで毎日日記を書くことを思い付きました。
添削して頂けたり教えて頂けたらうれしいです。
このサイトを初めて何日かたちました。
英語は難しいです。
なのでここで毎日日記を書くことを思い付きました。
添削して頂けたり教えて頂けたらうれしいです。
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It is past the days from I started this.Its been days since I started this.
English is very diddicult for me.English is very difficult for me.
So I thaught of a idea that I write daialy here.So I've got an idea, I think I should write a daily journal.
It is past the days from I started this.
Not sure what it is that you are trying to say here.
English is very difficult for me.
So I thought of a idea. I will write daily here.
I will be happy if you correct and teach me.
Keep it up! You're on the road to success!
よくできました!
It is past the days from Many days have passed since I started this.
Is that what you wanted to say? Here are some other options:
Many days have passed from when I started this.
Several days have passed from when I started this. (Several is less than many.)
I started this many days ago. (Or several.)
I think this next way sounds more natural:
It's been a while since I started this.
English is very difficult for me.
So I thought of a idea that - I should write daialy here daily.
There are many ways to say that. Here are some other options:
So I think that I should write here daily.
So I think that I should write a daily journal.
So I think that I should write a daily diary. (That looks weird - daily and diary. But it's not wrong. In a serious essay then I would write "daily journal", so they don't look the same. But in a fun story I would write "daily diary" because it looks interesting and makes me happy. )
I'll be happy if you correct and teach me.
Or "It would make me happy if you correct and teach me."
More natural:
Please correct and teach me.
I could understand what you wanted to say. (I hope.)
So, I think you can be more confident about your English. :)
There are many mistakes in your writing. But I think that the most important thing is that people understand what you write. And you achieved that! Yay! The mistakes are less important. Well done!
It's 1 month and 1 day since I started Lang-8, and I have only just written my third diary/journal. It's very difficult and scary. I think I should write more often. Daily would be good, but for me maybe that's aiming too high. So, I'll try to write at least one entry a week.
Bye!
I will not afraid mistakes, and keep writing daily diary!!
Thank you!
I will not afraid mistakes, and keep writing daily diary!!
Thank you!
Here is a correction of one sentence in your comment:
I won't be afraid of mistakes, and I'll keep writing a daily diary!! (or "my daily diary")
"I won't" is a more natural way of saying "I will not".