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I have been here in a hotel called Homeinn(如家） in Songjiang District in Shanghai since last night, preparing for my IELT oral test tomorrow, because here is so far away from urban district. And there are many colleges here.
However, when I prepared to have a rest, the couple lived in the next room began to groan, especially the girl, who groaned so loudly, that made me hard to sleep. What is more! They seemed like made love all the time without break! HOLY SHIT! They were happy enough, but made me so tired and ...as a normal man, you know...dreamed so many about sexy! And when I woke up this morning, I felt that there is no energy left!
Oh my God! Help me!
However, when I prepared to have a rest, the couple lived in the next room began to groan, especially the girl, who groaned so loudly, that made me hard to sleep. What is more! They seemed like made love all the time without break! HOLY SHIT! They were happy enough, but made me so tired and ...as a normal man, you know...dreamed so many about sexy! And when I woke up this morning, I felt that there is no energy left!
Oh my God! Help me!
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groan from the next roomThis is correct but I'd probably say groans or groaning (or perhaps moaning) instead.
I have been here in a hotel called Homeinn(如家） in Songjiang District in Shanghai since last night, preparing for my IELT oral test tomorrow, because here it's so far away from the urban district.Again, "here is so far away" isn't wrong, but "it's" just sounds more natural to me.
And there are many colleges here.As a general rule you shouldn't start a new sentence with "And". Sometimes native speakers do but it's only really ok in a few situations.
However, when I prepared to have a rest, the couple lived in the next room began to groan, especially the girl, who groaned so loudly, that made me hard to sleep.I might say "But when" instead of "However" to sound a little more natural and fit with the overall tone of the rest of the text.
What's more!This expression's always contracted to "What's more" rather than "What is more". Also it can't be a sentence by itself, it has to lead into a sentence. ie, "What's more, they seemed to be..."
They seemed like made to be making love all the time without a break!Or "It seemed like they were making love all the time without a break!"
HOLY SHIT!
They were happy enough, but made me so tired and ...
as a normal man, you know...
I dreamed so many much about sexy!Or "...about sexy things!" (though the second one doesn't sound 100% native), in any case you can only dream about a noun (ie, sex) and not an adjective (ie, "sexy").
And when I woke up this morning, I felt that there is I had no energy left!
Oh my God!
Help me!
Groans from Next Door
I've been staying in a hotel called Homeinn(如家）in Songjiang District in Shanghai since last night, preparing for my IELT oral test tomorrow, because it is so far away from the urban district.
There happen to be many colleges nearby.
However, when I prepared to go to sleep, the couple in the next room over began to moan, especially the girl, who moaned so loudly that it was difficult for me to sleep.
What's more, they seemed like they made love all night without a break!
They seemed like made love all the time without break!
They must have been happy, but it made me so tired. and ...
And as a normal man, you know, it made me dream so much about sex.
dreamed so many about sexy!
And when I woke up this morning, I felt like I had no energy left.