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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Lucy's latest journal entries Apr 15th 2009 17:17
First, I explain in my life last year.
When I was 14years old, I suffered a liitle bit big prize to city town wirting contest.
When city mayor gave a prize to me, I was so happy.
But today, My language teacher said,"Ji yeon, you must go to wirting contest. Because you get a wirting prize last year."
I don't want to go there. but,,,It is unavoidable.
Anyway,, I try to wirte a good wirting.
If you can wirte a good wirting, you should advice for me.
Then, I will so happy.
Apr 15th 2009 17:27 CaptainNapkins
  • English
  • Japanese

  • First, I explain in my life last year.
  • First, let me I explain in my life life as it was last year.
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  • When I was 14years old, I suffered a liitle bit big prize to city town wirting contest.
  • When I was 14 years old, I suffered won a bit liitle bit of a big prize to city in the town's writing contest.
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  • When city mayor gave a prize to me, I was so happy.
  • When the city mayor gave a the prize to me, I was so happy.
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  • But today, My language teacher said,"Ji yeon, you must go to wirting contest.
  • But Today, my language teacher said,"Ji Yeon, you must go to participate in the writing contest
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  • Because you get a wirting prize last year."
  • because you get a won the writing prize last year."
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  • I don't want to go there.
  • I don't want to go there,
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  • but,,,It is unavoidable.
  • but...it is unavoidable.
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  • Anyway,, I try to wirte a good wirting.
  • Anyway, I'll try to wirte a good wirting write well.
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  • If you can wirte a good wirting, you should advice for me.
  • If you can wirte a good wirting write well, you should advice for me I would appreciate some advice.
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  • Then, I will so happy.
  • Then, I will so be happy.
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Work on your grammar and punctuation, good luck!
Apr 15th 2009 17:31 minicat
  • English
  • Japanese, Mandarin

  • When I was 14years old, I suffered a liitle bit big prize to city town wirting contest.
  • When I was 14years old, I suffered a liitle bit from entering a city writing contest , but I did win a big prize to city town wirting contest.
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  • When city mayor gave a prize to me, I was so happy.
  • When the city mayor gave a prize to me, I was so happy.
Comment  
  • Because you get a wirting prize last year."
  • Because you get won a writing prize last year."
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  • I don't want to go there.
  • I don't want to go there enter it.
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  • If you can wirte a good wirting, you should advice for me.
  • If you can write a good wirtingstory, you should advisece for me.
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  • Then, I will so happy.
  • Then, I will be so happy.
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They say the best advice is "write about what you know", so you can write clearly about something you had experience of. But of course you can use the details of your experience in a different way in a different story.
Lucy
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  • English, Japanese

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