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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Lucy's latest journal entries Apr 18th 2009 13:32
Next week, My school students(only second grade.)go to travel.
We will visit Everland,many temple, Jung dong jin sea, and Mt. Seorak.
Why I'm expect this travel, because We go to with my friend!!
We sleep very nice condo. and we play the game.^^
Apr 18th 2009 14:02 ancientscribble

  • Next week, My school students(only second grade.)go to travel.
  • Next week, My 2nd grade school class will go on a trip.
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  • We will visit Everland,many temple, Jung dong jin sea, and Mt.
  • We will visit Everland, a few temples, the Jung dong jin sea, and Mt.
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  • Why I'm expect this travel, because We go to with my friend!!
  • I'm looking forward to this trip, because I am going with my friend!!
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  • We sleep very nice condo.
  • We will sleep in very nice condo.
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  • and we play the game.^^
  • And we play a game.^^
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Apr 18th 2009 14:40 lucie

  • We sleep very nice condo.
  • We will sleep in a very nice condo I think it's better if you don't end your sentence here since it's so short and the following can be attached to it !
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  • and we play the game.^^
  • and play games.^^
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Hope you'll have fun !
Apr 18th 2009 19:07 cheri

  • expect*^^*
  • excited! 아님 I can't wait!*^^*
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  • Next week, My school students(only second grade.)go to travel.
  • Next week, our school's junior class is going on a field trip. (I assume you mean 고등학교? In the US, that would be the same as the 11th grade; 11th grade students are called "juniors." But since there are three years of high school in Korea... I'm not sure what the equivalent in English would be... However, if you say "2nd grade," most people will think of elementary school.)
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  • We will visit Everland,many temple, Jung dong jin sea, and Mt.
  • We will visit Everland, many temples, the Jung dong jin sea, and Mt.
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  • Why I'm expect this travel, because We go to with my friend!!
  • I'm looking forward to this trip because I'm going with my friend!
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  • We sleep very nice condo.
  • We will sleep in a very nice condo
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  • and we play the game.^^
  • and play games.^^
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