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Jun 30th 2012 19:53
Today I woke up at 07:30.Then I got up and brushed my teeth and washed my face and washed a pair of crousers and a pair of socks.After hung them up,I started my notebook PC and entered the game,Killers of Three Kingdoms.But there was a low Internet speed.When it just was my turn,I was off line...>_<...Oh,no!How terrible it was!My teammates might be killed due to my escape!
blackinkedwings
Thank you for your correction!
Jun 30th 2012 22:01
  • How boring today is!

  • How boring today is! / What a boring day! / Today was such a bore.

 
  • Then I got up and brushed my teeth and washed my face and washed a pair of crousers and a pair of socks.

  • After I got up, I brushed my teeth and washed my face. Then I washed a pair of trousers and a pair of socks.

    I split the sentence because you're doing 2 separate activities. First you washed up after waking up, so I grouped those together. Next you did some laundry, so I grouped those. It's like grocery shopping, they pack the frozen food in one bag and detergent in another!

 
  • After hung them up,I started my notebook PC and entered the game,Killers of Three Kingdoms.

  • After hanging them up, I turned on my notebook PC and entered the game, Killers of Three Kingdoms.

 
  • But there was a low Internet speed.

  • But the internet speed was so slow.

    "So" is used as an adverb here, meaning 'to a great extent'.

 
  • When it just was my turn,I was off line...>_<...

  • When it was finally my turn, I was off line... >_<... / I had lagged out.

    I don't really know your meaning? But I'm thinking you lagged out! Haha

 
  • Oh,no!How terrible it was!My teammates might be killed due to my escape!

  • Oh, no! How terrible! My teammates might have been killed due to my sudden departure!

 
Remember to leave a space after each punctuation! (Except for apostrophe s.)
Jun 30th 2012 22:22 Yvemitha Ho
Wow~ Thank you~! "lag out" means "lose the Internet connection", right~? That is exactly what I wanted to say~ ^0^
Jun 30th 2012 22:25 blackinkedwings
Yeah, something like that, but only for games, where you're disconnected from the server. Hmm I think the word I was looking for is "disconnect". Otherwise you could just say you "lost (internet) connection". :D
Jun 30th 2012 22:30 Yvemitha Ho
Oh, I like "lag out"~ It sounds really professional~ Haha~ ^0^
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