Aug 23rd 2012 23:42
japanty
made 5 corrections for
I had tricked
sounds like you had quite the walk
- English
sounds like you had quite the walk


「Hope」が使いたいなら「But, I hope for his success!」で書かないといけないです。 確かに英語で歌っていますね? 椎名林檎っぽい音楽と思います。^_^