My plan of this summer vacation

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I aspire to trip abroad(actually I only visit to Taiwan....hehe)

So I have a plan to trip to foreign country.

This summer vacation I want to stay at Australia.

I want to visit all over the country,and want to eat local foods,I also want to learn English.

I know the trip must be a wonderful experiences for me!


我一直都渴望去國外旅遊,事實上我去國外只去過台灣

所以這暑假打算去國外旅行,想要去澳大利亞!

我要踏進澳大利亞的全地,吃光道地的佳餚,也要在那地學習英文

相信這次暑假的旅遊一定成為個很棒的經驗!


ずっと外国旅行がしたかった!(外国は台湾にしかいったことが無いから)
この夏休みは海外旅行に行きます!オーストラリアに行く!!

オーストラリアの全土に赴き、地元の料理を食べつくし、そして英語を上達させるぞー!

この計画、絶対楽しくなる!! いい経験になるぞー!
Jun 01st 2009 03:43 BearmanJR

  • My plan of this summer vacation
  • My plan of for this summer vacation

 

  • I aspire to trip abroad(actually I only visit to Taiwan....
  • I aspire to trip Travel abroad (actually I only visit to Taiwan....

 

  • So I have a plan to trip to foreign country.
  • So I have a plan to trip tovist a foreign country.

 

  • This summer vacation I want to stay at Australia.
  • This summer vacation I want to stay at in Australia.

 

  • I want to visit all over the country,and want to eat local foods,I also want to learn English.
  • I want to visit all over the country,and I want to eat local foods,I also want to learn English.

 

  • I know the trip must be a wonderful experiences for me!
  • I know the this trip must will be a wonderful experiences for me!

 
Jun 01st 2009 03:46 takako

To Bearman

Thx for your correct!! :)
Jun 01st 2009 04:15 Skyrin

  • My plan of this summer vacation
  • My plan for this (year's) summer vacation

 

  • I aspire to trip abroad(actually I only visit to Taiwan....
  • I aspire to travel abroad (However, I've only visited Taiwan....

 

  • So I have a plan to trip to foreign country.
  • So I have planned a trip to a foreign country.

 

  • This summer vacation I want to stay at Australia.
  • This summer vacation I want to stay in Australia.

 

  • I want to visit all over the country,and want to eat local foods,I also want to learn English.
  • I want to travel all over the country and want to eat the local foods. I also want to learn English.

 

  • I know the trip must be a wonderful experiences for me!
  • I know that the trip will be a wonderful experiences for me!

 
I was able to glance over the Japanese part as well and the meaning of the Japanese and English parts are slightly different. For example, "This summer vacation I want to stay in Australia." and "この夏休みは海外旅行に行きます!".
In the English sentence you are saying that you "want to go" but in the Japanese sentence you are saying that you "will be going". So I think you are trying to say "This summer I will be traveling abroad to Austrailia."
Jun 01st 2009 04:50 takako

To Skyrin
ありがとう~!
Because you can understand both Japanese and English so your correct is so kind!
Jun 01st 2009 13:19 jess_man1999

  • So I have a plan to trip to foreign country.
  • So, I have a planned a trip to Australia.

 

  • This summer vacation I want to stay at Australia.
  • This summer vacation I want to stay at Australia. (Since my correction in the previous sentence directly names the location where you wish to go, this sentence is not needed. If you choose Skyrim's correction his/her correction in good for this sentence.)

 

  • I want to visit all over the country,and want to eat local foods,I also want to learn English.
  • I want to go sightseeing all over the country, and want to dine on the local food. I also want to increase my English fluency.

 
If you talk about your trip again, you should include how long you will stay in Australia.

I hope your trip goes as planned. I'm sure you will have a lot of fun.
Jul 11th 2009 15:41 Marine

  • 我一直都渴望去國外旅遊,事實上我去國外只去過台灣
  • 我一直都渴望去國外旅遊,但是我只去過台灣

 

  • 所以這暑假打算去國外旅行,想要去澳大利亞!
  • 所以這暑假打算去其他國家旅行,想要去澳大利亞!

 

  • 我要踏進澳大利亞的全地,吃光道地的佳餚,也要在那地學習英文
  • 我要走遍整個澳大利亞,吃遍道地的佳餚,還要那裏學習英文

 

  • 相信這次暑假的旅遊一定成為個很棒的經驗!
  • 相信這次暑假的旅遊一定會是個很棒的經驗!

 
中文不錯!!希望妳澳洲之行愉快:)

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