first daily in lang-8(Self-introduction )

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Hi, dear friends,

My name is Jane, I come from china. I’m a female. I have just known the lang-8, this is my first daily in lang-8.

I graduated from a vocational school in 1999. In the vocational school, we didn’t have English lesson, and in my previous job, I nearly didn’t use English too. I haven’t studied English in last 9 years. My English knowledge was just from middle school.
I know English is very difficult for me, but I’ll try to do my best to improve my English level. Both fluent Oral English and good written English are very important for me.
Could you help me to polish up this article a bit?
Looking forward to hearing from you.

Kind regard,

Jane
April,23,2009
Apr 23rd 2009 11:36 atylmo

  • first daily in lang-8(Self-introduction )
  • first diary in lang-8(Self-introduction )

 

  • My name is Jane, I come from china.
  • My name is Jane, and I'm from China.

 

  • I have just known the lang-8, this is my first daily.
  • I have just recently learned about lang-8, and this is my first diary.

 

  • In the vocational school, we didn’t have English lesson, and in my current job, I nearly don’t use English.
  • In the vocational school, we didn’t have any English lessons, and in my current job, I nearly don’t use English.

 

  • I haven’t studied English in last 9 years.
  • I haven’t studied English in 9 years.

 

  • Kind regard,
  • Kind regards,

 

  • April,23,2009
  • April 23, 2009

 
Wow that's great English :D You haven't studied in 9 years? Doesn't seem like it. You write quite well, I think.
Apr 23rd 2009 11:42 G

  • first daily in lang-8(Self-introduction )
  • First diary in lang-8 (Self-introduction )

 

  • I have just known the lang-8, this is my first daily in lang-8.
  • I have just learned about lang-8, this is my first diary in lang-8.

 

  • In the vocational school, we didn’t have English lesson, and in my previous job, I nearly didn’t use English too.
  • In the vocational school, we didn’t have English lessons, and in my previous job I seldom used English too.

 

  • I haven’t studied English in last 9 years.
  • I haven’t studied English in the last 9 years.

 

  • Both fluent Oral English and good written English are very important for me.
  • Both fluent spoken English and good written English are very important for me.

 
Welcome to Lang-8!
I hope you enjoy it here, and best of luck with your English! This article looked very good to me.
Apr 23rd 2009 12:11 Jane

Thank you very much for your great help.

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