hi!! please correct this for me :D

hey it's been a while :D I was busy back then XD anyways i had just finished translating my favorite song and... was it correct??? ha...

my 4th entry! please correct it!

Okay, it's in romaji: Kyou wa isogashii desu. tsukareta ne...

Please help me...

Okay, so..how do I say this in japanese: I am at this place. thanks! doumo!

introducing myself! - in nihongo (romaji)

Hajimemashite! Watashi wa Maru desu. douzo yoroshiku onegaishimasu! atashi wa firipin-jin desu. juugo-sai desu. Kokou Gakusei des...

PLEASE TRANSLATE THIS FOR ME!

whats the meaning of ''tadashii ano japanese? ano ni anata yomu nazoku anata no ni commento! ikenai anata wa shazai suru.'' DOUMO ...