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hi nice to meet you. I'm shota. this is first journal in lang-8.
Today, I'm going to go the city library. and search about energy.because next week I'm gonna discuss about energy with foreign university students from china. they will come our university just for a week. and see lab,famous places, and homestay. During the week, we discuss about energy, car,electricity.
well, thank you so much for reading this journal.
see you
shota
Today, I'm going to go the city library. and search about energy.because next week I'm gonna discuss about energy with foreign university students from china. they will come our university just for a week. and see lab,famous places, and homestay. During the week, we discuss about energy, car,electricity.
well, thank you so much for reading this journal.
see you
shota
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Nice to Meet You!
Titles need to be capitalized.
Hi! Nice to meet you.
My name is Shota.
Names are always capitalized.
This is my first journal entry in Lang-8.
Today, I'm going to go to the city library and research energy.
The sentence "and search about energy" should be apart of the previous sentence.
This is because next week I'm gonna discuss about energy with foreign university students from China.
Countries are capitalized.
They will come to our university just for a week.
During the week, we will discuss energy, cars, and electricity.
Since you are talking about the future, you must place "will" before the verb.
Well, thank you so much for reading this journal.
Good luck.
this is my first journal entry in lang-8.
Today I'm going to go to the city library to search about energy because next week I'm going to discuss energy with foreign university students from China.
connect these three sentences - they do not belong on their own.
They will come to our university just for a week to see our lab and famous places, and also to do a homestay.
You must connect the two sentences, and also you must separate "seeing the lab and famous places" from "doing a homestay." You do not "see" a homestay, you "do" a homestay. Therefore, you must differentiate the two.
During the week, we discuss energy, cars, and electricity.
Today, I'm going to the city library to research energy.
They will come to our university, but just for a week.
They are coming to see our lab, famous places, and to do a home stay.