Teamwork.

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1.
My friend noticed I stay up late everynight to work,
she gave me instant hotchoco :-)
I love it! what I need for making hotchoco using this is only hot water.
Thank you, Evan! I remember you whenever I drink hotchoco you gave me.

2.
Today, I'll go to school to have a meeting with my team members about graduate exhibition.
There are three people on our team. 6 months have passed since we start preparing a work together.
We don't have any problem with work all the while.
We always trying to be good friend each other and repect each other.
so we don't need to take another person our team. It's enough.

I don't know exactly what happens to other team.
What I know is someone want to join our team because of some problems (maybe it's strife with members on that team)

I don't understand. Honestly we don't have to work with her.
All of members on our team know she is not responsible and honest.
when she joined other team, she seldom do her job. she always trying to say excuse why she didn't her job.
The bigest problem is..... she is really close to us(=me, and all of members.)
She strongly believe that she can join our team and we welcome her to our member.
The only thing we can do is just avoid her......

Jan 16th 2010 08:50 -Carey-

  • she gave me instant hotchoco :-)
  • so she gave me instant hot chocolate :-)

 

  • I remember you whenever I drink hotchoco you gave me.
  • I think ofyou whenever I drink thehotchocolateyou gave me.

 

  • We always trying to be good friend each other, and repect each other.
  • We always trying to be good friends to each other, and respect each other.

 

  • All of members on our team know she is not responsible and honest.
  • All of the members on our team know she is not responsible and honest.

 

  • when she joined other team, she seldom do her job.
  • when she joined the other team, she seldom didher job.

 

  • The bigest problem is.....
  • The biggest problem is.....

 
This is really good!! I didn't correct much... x)
Jan 16th 2010 08:58 ymistry

  • My friend noticed I stay up late everynight to work,
  • My friend noticed I stay up late every night to work,

 

  • she gave me instant hotchoco :-)
  • she gave me instant hot cocoa or you can call it hot chocolate)

 

  • what I need for making hotchoco using this is only hot water.
  • I just need to add hot water.

 

  • I remember you whenever I drink hotchoco you gave me.
  • I think of you whenever I drink the hot cocoa you gave me.

 

  • Today, I'll go to school to have a meeting with my team members about graduate exhibition.
  • Today, I'll go to school to have a meeting with my team members about our/my/the graduate exhibition.

 

  • 6 months have passed since we start preparing a work together.
  • 6 months have passed since we started preparing to work together.

 

  • We don't have any problem with work all the while.
  • We don't have any problem with working all the time.

 

  • We always trying to be good friend each other and repect each other.
  • We always try to be friendly towards each other and respect each other.

 

  • so we don't need to take another person our team.
  • We don't want to add another person to our team.

 

  • I don't know exactly what happens to other team.
  • I don't know exactly what happens to other teams.

 

  • What I know is someone want to join our team because of some problems (maybe it's strife with members on that team)
  • What I know is that someone wants to join our team because of some problems she is having with her team (maybe it's strife with members on that team)

 

  • All of members on our team know she is not responsible and honest.
  • All of the members on our team know she is not responsible and honest.

 

  • when she joined other team, she seldom do her job.
  • when she joined the other team, she seldom did her job.

 

  • she always trying to say excuse why she didn't her job.
  • she was always making excuses about why she didn't do her job.

 

  • She strongly believe that she can join our team and we welcome her to our member.
  • She strongly believes that she can join our team and we will welcome her to our team.

 
Jan 27th 2010 19:41 eljeffo

  • what I need for making hotchoco using this is only hot water.
  • I only need to add hot water to make hot chocolate.

 

  • 6 months have passed since we start preparing a work together.
  • We have worked together for 6 months. // 더 자연스러워요.

 

  • We don't have any problem with work all the while.
  • We never had any problems working with each other.

 

  • We always trying to be good friend each other and repect each other.
  • We always try to be friendly and respect one another.

 

  • I don't know exactly what happens to other team.
  • I don't really know what happens in the other teams.

 

  • Honestly we don't have to work with her.
  • Honestly we don't have to work with her. <- 같이 일 해야하지 않아요 // Honestly we don't need her. <- 사실 그냐를 필요없어요.

 

  • she is really close to us(=me, and all of members.)
  • she is really close to me and my team members. // 이렇게 하면 그 여자는 그냥 가깝게 있는지 않아요... 가까운 친한 친구 이는 의미 좀 있어요.

 

  • She strongly believe that she can join our team and we welcome her to our member.
  • She actually believes that we will welcome to to be a member of our team.

 

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