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Jun 28th 2009 19:05

It's being a long time,today is a comfortable day.I just prospect such day for more than one month.The past days I think that would be too hot,I can't stand it always.I must shower myself all the time.But today the weather turns to cool,so I have slept well for any time I want to sleep.
Only four days,I can be back home,also I would begin my summer vacation,I have made a plan for this vacation,I want to join my cousion's company and do work for him for free.Even thought that would be free,but I think over the work,I think I can be more closer to the social world.In other hand ,I think I can get more experences during such.Also I want to start to learn French for this vacation.I hope I can master more than three languages in the future.
cheer up.friends.Let's work harder and harder.

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Jun 28th 2009 19:31 Nina

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Japanese, Mandarin

It's being a long time,today is a comfortable day.
It's being been a long time. today is a comfortable day. (today's weather is comfortable)

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I just prospect such day for more than one month.
I just prospect have been hoping for such a day for more than one month.

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The past days I think that would be too hot,I can't stand it always.
The past days I think that would be I think the past days are too hot, I can't stand it always. I always couldn't stand it.

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But today the weather turns to cool,so I have slept well for any time I want to sleep.
But today the weather turns to turned cool,so I have slept well for any time I wanted to sleep.

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Only four days,I can be back home,also I would begin my summer vacation,I have made a plan for this vacation,I want to join my cousion's company and do work for him for free.
Only four days more and I can be back home. Also, I would begin I'm beginning my summer vacation. I have made a plan for this vacation. I want to join my cousion's company and do work for him for free.

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Even thought that would be free,but I think over the work,I think I can be more closer to the social world.
Even thought that would be free (I don't earn any money), but I think over the through work,I think I can be more become closer to the social world.

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In other hand ,I think I can get more experences during such.
In other hand ,I think I can get more experences during such. I also think I can get more experiences.

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Also I want to start to learn French for this vacation.
Also I want to start to learn French for during this vacation.

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Jun 29th 2009 05:23 Bah_Dure

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Japanese, French

It's being a long time,today is a comfortable day.
It's being a long time,today is a comfortable day. (or "It's been a long time, but I've finally had a comfortable day.")

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I just prospect such day for more than one month.
I just prospect such day for more than one month. (or "I usually have such a day just once a month.")

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The past days I think that would be too hot,I can't stand it always.
The past days I think that would be too hot,I can't stand it always. (or "It's been too hot for me recently; I can barely stand it.")

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But today the weather turns to cool,so I have slept well for any time I want to sleep.
But today the weather turned cool, so I can sleep well whenever I want to sleep. (any time=whenever)

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Only four days,I can be back home,also I would begin my summer vacation,I have made a plan for this vacation,I want to join my cousion's company and do work for him for free.
In only four days I will be back home, and I will begin my summer vacation. I have made a plan for this vacation: I want to join my cousin's company and work for him for free.

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Even thought that would be free,but I think over the work,I think I can be more closer to the social world.
Even though I won't be paid, through the work I think I will go farther in the social world.

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Hey Tony~~!!!

It's great you had a good day. (^_^)
It's been pretty hot where I live too.
I guess summer has come. :)

I hope you can get a job at your cousin's company.
Also, learning French sounds fun.
Good luck!

Jun 29th 2009 15:58 cherryishkerry

English
Japanese, Mandarin

It's being a long time,today is a comfortable day.
It's being a long time since a day has been as comfortable as today.

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I must shower myself all the time.
I must shower myself all the time. (No need to say "myself" because you used "I" in the beginning.)

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But today the weather turns to cool,so I have slept well for any time I want to sleep.
However, But today the weather turneds cooler to cool, allowing me to sleep well during the times when I wanted to sleep.

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Only four days,I can be back home,also I would begin my summer vacation,I have made a plan for this vacation,I want to join my cousion's company and do work for him for free.
Only four more days until I can return be back home and ,also I would begin my summer vacation. My I have made a plan for this vacation is ,I want to join my cousion's company and do work for him for free.

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Even thought that would be free,but I think over the work,I think I can be more closer to the social world.
Even thought I'm doing unpaid work that would be free,but I think the experience will bring me over the work,I think I can be more closer to the social world. (When you use words that end in "er" like closer or faster, there is no need to use the word "more" beforehand. The reason is because --> more close = closer)

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In other hand ,I think I can get more experences during such.
Moreover, I would be able to obtain more work experience. In other hand ,I think I can get more experences during such. (It's actually "On the other hand". When you use "On the other hand", it signals something that is opposite of what you said before. You wrote that working for free will allow you to be -more social- and to -obtain more work experience-, which are both -positive-. If you wanted to use "On the other hand" you can say for example --> On the other hand, I would have less time to spend with my friends. As you can see, this sentence is -negative-. Lastly, the word "obtain" sounds better than "get". You can also use "gain".

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Also I want to start to learn French for this vacation.
Also I also want to start to learning French during for this year's vacation. (Avoid starting sentences with "also". Try "Moreoever, I want to start ...." or "Additionally, I want to start...)

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I hope the corrections help! I know some explanations are long, but I just wanted to make sure you understand.

Great work!