My suggestions and ask favors

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My suggestions and ask favors

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Aug 28th 2009 02:00

For being a long time,I have never worte journals,nowadays I was busy for my work "international trade",I learned by myself and from my cousion.Just now I read a journal and think long time,suddenly I found I made a lot of mistakes,for the errors,I never thought ways to solve the problems.Always at the second time,I make the same mistake again.That's really let me down and let me lose a lot.
Hope friends can help me,I wanna find the way to solve these problem.

By the way,I want to ask friends,which search enginers do you use for your countries,can you introduce them to me? Also I want to know more about these websites,such as B2B,and any other sites. If you can,please leave your words to this entry.
Thank you so much.

Sep 06th 2009 02:51 pehpatamas

English
Spanish, Italian

My suggestions and ask favors
My suggestions and ask favors This does not make sense. Maybe you mean, 'Comments and Asking Favors' 'ask' is a verb, so you need to change it into a Gerund to make it a noun.

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For being a long time,I have never worte journals,nowadays I was busy for my work "international trade",I learned by myself and from my cousion.
For being a long time, I have never wrote journals, nowadays I was busy for my work "international trade",I learned by myself and from my cousin. This does not make sense, do you mean, "It has been a long time since I wrote in a journal. Nowadays, I am busy working for"International Trade". I learned by myself and from my cousin."?

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Just now I read a journal and think long time,suddenly I found I made a lot of mistakes,for the errors,I never thought ways to solve the problems.
Just now I was reading a journal and thinking for a long time about it .Suddenly I found I made a lot of mistakes,for the errors, but I never can think of ways to solve the problems. I understand what you mean.

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Always at the second time,I make the same mistake again.
Always on the second time, I make the same mistake again. 'at' is used for location. 'on the second time' is used for an attempt.

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That's really let me down and let me lose a lot.
That really lets me down and let me lose a lot. "That really lets me down" is a phrase that is used when someone disapoints you. 'let me lose a lot' makes no sense, maybe you mean, 'I loose confidence'.

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Hope friends can help me,I wanna find the way to solve these problem.
I Hope friends can help me,I want to find the way to solve these problems 'I' shows who is hoping. 'wanna' is slang, and not appropriate for proper English. 'these' denotes plural objects, so 'these problem' does not agree, because 'problem' is singular.

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By the way,I want to ask friends,which search enginers do you use for your countries,can you introduce them to me?
By the way, I want to ask friends, which search engines do you use for your countries, and can you introduce them to me? 'enginers' is not a word. 'and' is optional, but adds fluency to the speech.

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Also I want to know more about these websites,such as B2B,and any other sites.
Also, I want to know more about these websites,such as B2B,and any other sites Good.

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If you can,please leave your words to this entry.
If you can, please leave your comments to this entry. 'Comments' or 'corrections' are better to use than 'words' here because they are more specific to the act of posting.

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Good work, practice make perfect.