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Oct 24th 2009 18:20

My blog address is http://profiles.yahoo.com/blog/YRSYB4DAPLRN54ZC6ZQ6OQYKCQ?eid=EtO5ORBhmHlMrYuzDQJiT7qaH6.Ff6mIPzsrAHBpv34VhseW1A

But at that place can not upload images,so I will show some pictures here.
And this is the text contents.I copy from my blog.haha
Hello everyone,

This ismy first blog in Yahoo.At this blog I just wanna introduce myself to all of you.

My profile:

Just now,I am a student for college andmy major is international trade ,also I work for ancompany what is producing sprockets.our website is www.sylianlun.com . If you need to think what is sprocket or want to buy some sprockets,pls feel free to contact me.Thank you!

The above is my work and I should introduce myself now,I am 21year-old.My hometown is shaoxing where is a old-line city and you can eat lots true food about CHinese.My hometown is alsoadapt for live andtrip.It's beautiful and passional. My friends,if you want to visit CHina,Pls let me know,I will introduce you lots of funny places.

Just end for these words,I will entry some of our habbit and normal life for my Blog,hope all of you can interested in my Blog.Thank you!

By Tony

Oct 24th 2009 23:18 翔太

English
Japanese, Spanish

I copy from my blog.
I'm copying from my blog.

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This ismy first blog in Yahoo.
This ismy first blog on Yahoo.

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Just now,I am a student for college andmy major is international trade ,also I work for ancompany what is producing sprockets.
Just now,I am a student for college andmy major is international trade ,also I work for an company that is producing sprockets. (It's always "a," but whether you add the n to "a" to make it "an" is determined by whether or not the thing after it starts with a vowel. if it does, it's "an," otherwise, it's "a." A company has an octopus.)

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If you need to think what is sprocket or want to buy some sprockets,pls feel free to contact me.
If you need to know what a sprocket is or want to buy some sprockets,pls feel free to contact me.

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The above is my work and I should introduce myself now,I am 21year-old.
The above text is about my work ("job" if you are working on getting a better job, in which case getting a better job [or perhaps a hobby] would be your work) and I should introduce myself now,I am 21year-old.

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My hometown is shaoxing where is a old-line city and you can eat lots true food about CHinese.
My hometown is shaoxing where there is an old-line ("old-line?") city and you can eat lots true food about CHinese. ("about" is when you talk.)

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My hometown is alsoadapt for live andtrip.
My hometown is alsoadapt for live andtrip. (?)

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It's beautiful and passional.
It's beautiful and passionate.

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My friends,if you want to visit CHina,Pls let me know,I will introduce you lots of funny places.
My friends,if you want to visit CHina,Pls let me know,I will introduce you to lots of funny places.

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Just end for these words,I will entry some of our habbit and normal life for my Blog,hope all of you can interested in my Blog.
Just end for these words,I will entry about some of our habits and what's normal in life for my Blog,hope all of you can interested in my Blog.

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Not sure if i could've corrected better or not... If only i knew what you were trying to say in some places...

Oct 25th 2009 12:55 bluejay390

English
Italian, Japanese

But at that place can not upload images,so I will show some pictures here.
But at that place I can not cannot upload images,so I will show some pictures here.

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And this is the text contents.
And this is the text contents. (You don't need the word "contents" because it is implied that you are talking about the text's content. But, if you want to still write the word "content" you would have to say "And this is the text's content"

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The above is my work and I should introduce myself now,I am 21year-old.
The above is about my work and I should will introduce myself now,. I am 21year-old years old. (You can also say "I am a 21 year old (man)." The word man at the end is optional. I typed "will" instead of "should" because it just sounded better because you used the word "and" to connect 2 sentences together. If you want to use the word "should" you can say "The above is about my work so I should introduce myself now." "will introduce" stills sounds better to me for some reason. You can also delete the word "and" and make 2 seperate sentences: "The above is about my work. I should introduce myself now."

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My hometown is shaoxing where is a old-line city and you can eat lots true food about CHinese.
My hometown is shaoxing where there is a an old-line city (I do not know what you mean by "old-line city") and you can eat lots of true food about Chinese food. ("true Chinese" is the adjective in this sentences and describes the word "food" so it has to come before the noun/word that it is describing. What kind of food? true Chinese food.

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My hometown is alsoadapt for live andtrip.
My hometown is also adapt for to live in and to take a trip to. (The verb "to take a trip to" can also be replaced with "to visit." Both would be correct in this sentence.)

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Just end for these words,I will entry some of our habbit and normal life for my Blog,hope all of you can interested in my Blog.
I will just end for with these words: I will entry write (entries/an entry) about some of our habbit habits and normal life for my Blog. I hope all of you can are interested in my Blog. (You can also say "I hope all of you can find something interesting in my blog."