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What have I done during the... Hi Tony - a good way to support you learning German might be listening to german music. Hopefully this gives an idea of how to pronouncia...
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can you leave your words fo... Over all correction when looking at the site and thinking... "Blessings" has a more religious connotation. Do you mean christma...
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My entry for group Not sure if i could've corrected better or not... If only i knew what you were trying to say in some places...
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wow Hey Tony~~!!!
It's great you had a good day. (^_^)
It's been pretty hot where I live too.
I guess summer has come. :)
I hope you ...
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cool Hey Tony~~!!!
That is a big problem.
On the one hand, staying in college will help you get a good job.
On the other hand, being a so...
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my virus(Ⅲ) The warnings about viruses are good, but you should be aware that some viruses take advantage of bugs in internet browsers and other prog...
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my virus(Ⅲ) Hello Tony~~!!!
RobertM corrected well, so I'll just comment. :)
Your advise about viruses is very good.
Sometimes I'm not careful a...
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Computer Virus (Ⅱ) Hello Tony~~!!!
That sounds very tiring.
I'm sorry you had to do all that. ;__;
Hopefully next time you will know better what to do...
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About the virus which infec... Hello Tony~~!!!
That computer problem seems pretty bad.
I wonder how you were able to get rid of it. :)
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I will be free Ah, I think I visited xi'an before.The terracotta warriors there are impressive!
It's true that many movies from America depict China ...
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friends,can you help me Hello Tony~~!!! (^_^)
I don't know if they'll help you, but I found this site about perfect tenses:
http://englishplus.com/grammar/00...
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friends,can you help me Prepositions have no rules. You'll just have to learn by trial, error and reading a lot.
Past perfect is used to talk about an action ...
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First blood Souris18 is right. The first sentence should say "It's being a long time since I worte a new entry." Sorry. I forgot a word whe...
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First blood I didn't know you liked Sylvester Stallone! :) Cool.
Your English is good. Most of your mistakes are things that I would expect a nati...
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I will be free Tony, it has been a long time since I came to lang-8. Sorry I have not corrected your diary entries recently. This diary entry is so good...
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That is mine Good luck on your tests! In the United States, we are reaching the end of the school year so have our finals too coming up. I only have...
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My daytime Wow, that looks really cool! I still don't understand what the Chinese skin shade is very well but it looks interesting. I'm taking a C...
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About my English This entry is much better!! I could understand more of it! :)
I think another one of your problems is knowing when to use the right co...
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Today Lang-8 made it look like L.A. was part of two different sentences, I know what you meant though. You're sentence was fine I just changed...
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Today hhmm...nothing funny really happened to me. Yesterday, my mother and I were making Macaroni and Cheese from a box, and my mom isn't used ...
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some problems of learning ... Hey Tony!!!
First of all, your use of articles ("a", "an", "the") is actually very good. :)
You bigg...
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some problems of learning ... I also recommend using flashcards to learn words and/or sentences. I like to use Anki (http://ichi2.net/anki/).
If you want to practi...
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some problems of learning ... I'm learning Spanish right now and I'm having the same problems as you! I've found that it's very helpful to have a notebook where I wri...
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some problems of learning ... I would suggest flash cards for your vocabulary- they really do work wonders if you use them. Write an English word or phrase on one side...
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My heart This was hard to understand at first but after I reread it, it was easy to follow. :)
Some notes:
1) Use "an" before words ...
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My heart Hi Tony, I'm sorry to hear that you had a hard day. :(
But tomorrow might be better, I'm sure !
By the way, not going to my cousin's ...
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Pray That was a terrible event for Sichuan, for China, and for the world. May we never forget those whose lives were lost and those who lives...
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From my friend This is really long. Ahaha, but still, good job translating.
This also happened to me...but it was a little confusing.
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From my friend Wow, that was long! You had a few corrections but overall it was well written. There were some phrases that I didn't understand though....
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For commemorate This is a very thoughtful journal entry. I hope for the well being of everyone who was affected by that tragedy.
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mother'day 我現在用中文講,因為有些很重要的事情要告訴你:
第一,你必須學會怎麼用標點符號。標點用得不正確會導致讀者不便。逗號,單引號和句號都有它們一定的用法規律,建議你去研究一下。
第二,建議你把比較長的文章分成幾個段落。
第三,在寫一篇文章前,要先想好你要寫什么。...
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today I'm not sure how to help you with listening to things. It's something i'm not very good at either.
I hope the rain clears soon for you.
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my computer Glad to hear you got rid of the viruses, tony! Just be careful where you surf and get a good anti-virus program, that way you'll stay vir...
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my computer Those msn viruses are popping up everywhere recently. Several of my friends ahve had them. I'm glad you've managed to get rid of it.
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my computer Your English is very good. You only have a few errors with tenses. Keep working hard!
I'm sorry that your computer got a virus. I have...
Hi Tony - a good way to support you learning German might be listening to german music. Hopefully this gives an idea of how to pronouncia...
Over all correction when looking at the site and thinking... "Blessings" has a more religious connotation. Do you mean christma...
Same to you, tony.
Sorry if my corrections are a little long. Sprockets! Yeah!
Not sure if i could've corrected better or not... If only i knew what you were trying to say in some places...
Good work, practice make perfect.
I hope the corrections help! I know some explanations are long, but I just wanted to make sure you understand. Great work!
Hey Tony~~!!! It's great you had a good day. (^_^) It's been pretty hot where I live too. I guess summer has come. :) I hope you ...
Hey Tony~~!!! That is a big problem. On the one hand, staying in college will help you get a good job. On the other hand, being a so...
The warnings about viruses are good, but you should be aware that some viruses take advantage of bugs in internet browsers and other prog...
Hello Tony~~!!! RobertM corrected well, so I'll just comment. :) Your advise about viruses is very good. Sometimes I'm not careful a...
Hello Tony~~!!! That sounds very tiring. I'm sorry you had to do all that. ;__; Hopefully next time you will know better what to do...
Hello Tony~~!!! That computer problem seems pretty bad. I wonder how you were able to get rid of it. :)
I suggest that you purchase Kaspersky. =D
Ah, I think I visited xi'an before.The terracotta warriors there are impressive! It's true that many movies from America depict China ...
Hello Tony~~!!! (^_^) I don't know if they'll help you, but I found this site about perfect tenses: http://englishplus.com/grammar/00...
Prepositions have no rules. You'll just have to learn by trial, error and reading a lot. Past perfect is used to talk about an action ...
Souris18 is right. The first sentence should say "It's being a long time since I worte a new entry." Sorry. I forgot a word whe...
I didn't know you liked Sylvester Stallone! :) Cool. Your English is good. Most of your mistakes are things that I would expect a nati...
Tony, it has been a long time since I came to lang-8. Sorry I have not corrected your diary entries recently. This diary entry is so good...
Good luck on your tests! In the United States, we are reaching the end of the school year so have our finals too coming up. I only have...
Wow, that looks really cool! I still don't understand what the Chinese skin shade is very well but it looks interesting. I'm taking a C...
I found this very interesting, and I would be glad to continue to read what you have tosay.
Hi, thank for you help hope you have a good day it is so hot in Bangkok. right now.. wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
I didn't finish correcting this, sorry. I'm in a bit of a rush... I'll finish it up later!
You did a good job. You got a lot of answers right. :)
This entry is much better!! I could understand more of it! :) I think another one of your problems is knowing when to use the right co...
Lang-8 made it look like L.A. was part of two different sentences, I know what you meant though. You're sentence was fine I just changed...
hhmm...nothing funny really happened to me. Yesterday, my mother and I were making Macaroni and Cheese from a box, and my mom isn't used ...
Hey Tony!!! First of all, your use of articles ("a", "an", "the") is actually very good. :) You bigg...
I also recommend using flashcards to learn words and/or sentences. I like to use Anki (http://ichi2.net/anki/). If you want to practi...
I'm learning Spanish right now and I'm having the same problems as you! I've found that it's very helpful to have a notebook where I wri...
I would suggest flash cards for your vocabulary- they really do work wonders if you use them. Write an English word or phrase on one side...
dairy means something else :P
This was hard to understand at first but after I reread it, it was easy to follow. :) Some notes: 1) Use "an" before words ...
Hi Tony, I'm sorry to hear that you had a hard day. :( But tomorrow might be better, I'm sure ! By the way, not going to my cousin's ...
That was a terrible event for Sichuan, for China, and for the world. May we never forget those whose lives were lost and those who lives...
This is really long. Ahaha, but still, good job translating. This also happened to me...but it was a little confusing.
Wow, that was long! You had a few corrections but overall it was well written. There were some phrases that I didn't understand though....
沉痛哀悼四川大地震的遇难者.
This is a very thoughtful journal entry. I hope for the well being of everyone who was affected by that tragedy.
我現在用中文講,因為有些很重要的事情要告訴你: 第一,你必須學會怎麼用標點符號。標點用得不正確會導致讀者不便。逗號,單引號和句號都有它們一定的用法規律,建議你去研究一下。 第二,建議你把比較長的文章分成幾個段落。 第三,在寫一篇文章前,要先想好你要寫什么。...
Just a few parts were a bit confusing.
Great post.
I'm not sure how to help you with listening to things. It's something i'm not very good at either. I hope the rain clears soon for you.
Good work, Tony. ^^
Good job, keep it up. :)
Glad to hear you got rid of the viruses, tony! Just be careful where you surf and get a good anti-virus program, that way you'll stay vir...
Those msn viruses are popping up everywhere recently. Several of my friends ahve had them. I'm glad you've managed to get rid of it.
Your English is very good. You only have a few errors with tenses. Keep working hard! I'm sorry that your computer got a virus. I have...