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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of lisayou's latest journal entries Jun 04th 2009 12:33
I used to like drink alcohol beverages in college but that was long time
ago. Now I did not feel like drinking and I have not drunk for a year.

I was not bad at drinking. In summer, I liked to drink draft beer or
flavored cocktail. In winter, I liked spirit, such as brandy or whisky.
Whenever I went out dinning, I liked to have aperitif and some wine
go with my meals.

Whenever I needed to celebrate somehting, I liked to buy shampagne.
I could drink a mix of drinks and did not have bad hangovers the next morning.
Although I heard yogurt with apples or sports drinks are good
for hangovers, I never needed to try them.

I think I were born with a good drinking capacity.
I seldom got drunk. If I got drunk, I normally just felt sleepy.
Therefore, I think I was a good drinker:)
One thing I did was that I liked to visit local liquor stores
whenever I went to a new place.

Anyway, I think time can change a lot of things,
I don't drink now.
I missed my drinking days.
What are your faovite drinks?
Jun 04th 2009 12:46 mymtt

I like tea and coffee. Reading books at cafe is my favorite thing to do in my spare time.

I can't drink alcohol. I get drunk even with a chocolate bonbon.
Jun 04th 2009 16:20 furrykef

  • I used to like drink alcohol beverages in college but that was long time
  • I used to like to drink alcoholic beverages in college but that was long time
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  • Now I did not feel like drinking and I have not drunk for a year.
  • Now I do not feel like drinking and I have not drunk for a year.
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  • flavored cocktail.
  • a flavored cocktail.
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  • In winter, I liked spirit, such as brandy or whisky.
  • In winter, I liked spirits, such as brandy or whisky.
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  • Whenever I went out dinning, I liked to have aperitif and some wine
  • Whenever I went out dining, I liked to have an aperitif and some wine
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  • go with my meals.
  • to go with my meals.
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  • Whenever I needed to celebrate somehting, I liked to buy shampagne.
  • Whenever I needed to celebrate something, I liked to buy shampagne.
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  • I think I were born with a good drinking capacity.
  • I think I was born with a good drinking capacity.
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  • I don't drink now.
  • I don't drink now. (Suggestion: I don't drink anymore. However, "now" is not incorrect.)
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  • I missed my drinking days.
  • I miss my drinking days.
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  • What are your faovite drinks?
  • What are your favorite drinks?
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I think you shouldn't hit "enter" at the end of each line. It's easier to understand the corrections when you can see the complete sentence, which is only possible if you don't hit "enter" in the middle of the sentence.

You're doing well. Keep up the good work! :)
Jun 05th 2009 10:19 lisayou

Hi Tomo,

I cant imagine someone could get drunk over a bonbon:)
It is so cute!
Anyway, I dont think drinking is necessary if you cant drink
In Taiwan, a lot of girls dont like guys who drink:)
Jun 05th 2009 10:29 lisayou

Hi furrykef ,

It is nice to know you:)
Thank you for your corrections and advice.
I learned to pay more attention to my spelling and use the right verb tense and noun quantification.
I will remember to not to hit enter in the middle or at the end of a sentence.
I am almost writing everyday so please help me again with my English:)
Jun 05th 2009 12:23 mymtt

So I’d better to move to Taiwan :-)

It seems you still place an “Enter” for each line. You could write the message to furrykef like the following, and it would be more easy to read:

It is nice to know you :)

Thank you for your corrections and advice. I learned to pay more attention to my spelling and use the right verb tense and noun quantification. I will remember to not to hit enter in the middle or at the end of a sentence.

I am almost writing everyday so please help me again with my English :)
Jun 06th 2009 11:11 lisayou

Hi Tomo,

Thank you for taking the time to point out my mistakes and show me a example writing. Your example helped me to understand how to write exactly as told. So I am doing alright now. amn't I:)
lisayou
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