我跑五公里

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今天我跑五公里了
然後我洗浴了
洗澡后
我喝啤酒和葡萄酒非常爽快
我晚上喝多了
別宿醉!
jintian wo pao wu gongli le
ranhou wo xiyu le
suzui hou
wo he pijiu he putaojiu feichang shuangkuai
wo wanshang duole
bie suzui

I ran abouot 5km today.
Then I took a bath.
After that,
I drank beer and wine and felt very good.
I drank a lot tonight.
Don't have a hungover!

今日、5キロ走ったんや。
その後風呂に入った。
風呂を出た後、
ビールとワインを飲んだわ。
今晩はめちゃ飲んだな。
二日酔いになるなや!
Jul 10th 2010 23:22 angela

  • 我跑五公里
  • 我跑五公里

 

  • 今天我跑五公里了
  • 今天我跑五公里

 

  • 然後我洗浴了
  • 然後我去洗澡洗浴了

 

  • 洗澡后
 

  • 我喝啤酒和葡萄酒非常爽快
  • 我喝啤酒和葡萄酒非常爽快

 

  • 我晚上喝多了
  • 我晚上今天晚上我喝多了

 

  • 別宿醉!
  • 不要宿醉!

 
Feb 16th 2012 23:05 Jay.Yu
我喝啤酒和葡萄酒非常爽快
我喝了啤酒和葡萄酒後感覺非常的爽快
Jul 11th 2010 11:11 Kaaaaitlin

  • I ran abouot 5km today.
  • I ran about 5km today.

 

  • I drank beer and wine and felt very good.
  • I drank beer and wine and felt very/really good.

 

  • Don't have a hungover!
  • I hope I don't have a hangover! OR I don't want to be hungover.

 
二日酔いだ -___-
Jul 25th 2010 16:06 Ling

  • 我喝啤酒和葡萄酒非常爽快
  • 我喝啤酒和葡萄酒,感覺非常爽快

1 people think this correction is good.  
All the sentences are correct :)
however personally I suggest if you could use some words to link them,
(for example: however, after, before, in addition,. etc)
would be very good for all your readers!
Cheers ~!!
Jan 16th 2011 00:20 Xiang

  • 今天我跑五公里了
  • 今天我跑五公里

 

  • 然後我洗浴了
  • 然後我洗了

 
Aug 26th 2011 11:29 Lin

  • 我喝啤酒和葡萄酒非常爽快
  • 我喝啤酒和葡萄酒,非常爽快!

 

  • 別宿醉!
  • 希望不要宿醉!

 
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